The Lies We Tell (13/15)

[gwassh0ppa]

Title: The Lies We Tell (13/15)
Pairing: gen, possible C/G
Rating: K+
Disclaimer: LtM not mine. Donnell is property of David E Kelley (DEK).
Summary: When Zoe brings a new case and a new partner to the Lightman Group, long-buried truths will be revealed as they work to defend an innocent man, while a side investigation could also place one

Comments

[zolotazirka]

*gasps for air* No you do not. That was a tense and scary chapter. Please let Gillian get out unharmed.

[gwassh0ppa]

Tense and scary? EXCELLENT. AND... we'll see.

THANKS!

[crumpled_up]

Are you TRYING TO KILL ME? And everyone in this fic? Jeez. You are so mean leaving it on this cliffhanger.

But oh, oh so dark and painful. Ouch. It was almost like the torture on 24, where you don't want to look (or in this case read) but you can't help it.

Henri is here! And Lindsay! Yay. And I'm loving how everyone is hating on Cal, even Emily. Love. It. And Torres' dressing down? Yes. Her guilt trip. Banking on him. Lay it on, I say. Make him feel worse. Emotional torture, I love it. :P

Now that I'm shaking with anticipation, WHEN IS THE NEXT PART COMING? A;SLDKFJAS;LDKFJLS;DKJFS

♥

[gwassh0ppa]

Yes. Yes. I am. I lulled all of you into complacency. Needed to shake things up a bit.

I know right? Imagine writing it. I had much worse stuff, but it was too awful.

Henri! Lindsay! Woot woot. A lot of the Cal hate has to do with this current season. I dislike him a lot. However, even in the beginning, I was setting him up for this, so whatever.

THE NEXT PART IS COMING SOON. I PROMISE.

[vivrebarefoot]

I said mortal peril in the summary. I DO NOT PLAY.

No, no dear gwassh0ppa, you do not. I think I may have skipped over that summary in my entusiasticness to read the next installment. Imagine my suprise: Dark and dangerous? Check. Blood, guts, and torture (including *gulps* hooks)? Check. Cal beating himself up because he wasn't listening (again)? Check. Gill in MORAL PERIL? CHECK. LE FORT ON THE LOOSE?! DOUBLE CHECK. *hyperventilating begins*

And here I sit staring at the screen, leaning forward, eyes wide, holding my breath and IT ENDS. What are you trying to do to me?! Give me a heart attack!? WHAT HAPPENS NEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXTTTTTTT!?1?1?!?!? *freaks out until next installment*

PS - love the dichotomy of Gill in dark and grossness and Cal/Em in white snow and childish playtime. <3s

[vivrebarefoot]

Mortal* correction. Cal is in moral peril. Gill in danger of being dead. Please excuse my typos..... I am tired.

[gwassh0ppa]

LOLOL. Hyperventilating? NICE.

Yes, see. As a writer, I find that the readers tend to get... spoiled a bit with happy resolutions at the end of each chap. NEEDED TO SHAKE.IT.UP.

HAHAHA. Next part will be up soon. I swears it.

THANK YOU FOR OBSERVING MY INTENTIONAL ENVIRONMENTAL COMPARE/CONTRAST THERE. SOMEONE GETS ME. FOUR FOR YOU.

[aleia_jade]

~DARK THEMATIC ELEMENTS~ YOU DON'T PLAY, BABY. I BROKE OUT THE SWEARING IN MY NOTES. ALSO EVERYTHING IN THEM IS CAPSLOCK. ANYTHING NOT IN CAPSLOCK WAS IN ASCENDED LOWERCASE, WHI--HOLY SHOOT MY ROOMMATE JUST OPENED THE DOOR AND I SCREAMED--CH MEANS THAT IT WAS SUCH THAT IT NEEDED SOMETHING EVEN MORE THAN CAPS. AND MY SPELLING WAS TOTALLY BAZACKO

[aleia_jade]

Oh Emily. Physics+snowfort slide. So much win.

OH MY GOSH. LIGHTMAN. WHAT A JERK

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FOSTER

IVANA OH MY GOSH OOUUUUUUUHHHHH
--And here started audibly expressions of distress. Don't remember why or where, but I read something about the practice of cutting out tongues, and that lots of people died because they choked...and you know what? We're just going to move on now.

Aww, he'd never been in her bedroom? Do like this.
Boooooks. I didn't know it was possible to love Foster more.

~SCIENCE~ PRESENCE OF SOMETHING MORE Oh the crazy evil oh bad bad bad. Humanity

ESPECIALLY YOUR HANDS OH MY GOSH. HANDS. HANDS. PIANO. HANDS. PIANO. HANDS.

I got to the description of Henri and couldn't even read it because I was all OMWOMWOMWGILLIAAAN

[aleia_jade]

lol spam. Also, I CANNOT WAIT TO READ THIS COVER TO COVER and catch all the elements woven through and hints and subtleties.

[gwassh0ppa]

LOL. SPAM. HI THERE.

WHY YES. I CANNOT WAIT FOR THAT EITHER. YOU ROCK. YOU'LL GET THAT PDF. JUST YOUUUUUU WAIIIIT.

[bsgroxmysox]

OK just noticed update now. Can't possibly comment on chapter because I am still dead. Real life has gotten in the way here which means I have not been getting my LTM fix and I've been avoiding fics because of spoilers, but when I saw this I had to read. You are cruel and awesome all at the same time. Sorry about the semi-drunk comment but I had to read as soon as I saw! Still loving this fic despite my usual love for all things fluffy ;)

Thank you for his :D

[gwassh0ppa]

CRUEL AND AWESOME?!? Ok. I'll take it. I like semi-drunk too :)

Yes, fluffy. Not a fan. But I am glad you enjoy! THANKS!