Mamihlapinatapai 6/6

[gwassh0ppa]

Title: Mamihlapinatapai 6/6
Pairing: Cal/Gillian
Disclaimer: LtM not mine
Summary: A look shared by two people with each wishing that the other will initiate something that they both desire but which neither one wants to start. For Pineapple.
A/N: Mmmm on ff.net this chapter is labeled SEX for SIX. I'll let you draw your own conclusion :)

Comments

[crumpled_up]

There are SO many lines that I love. Seriously. Then I realized if I mentioned every single one, I'd be quoting nearly the entire thing. So, I'll settle for this one:

He smells like fire, apple cider, and tidings of comfort and joy. You wonder if he's hiding Santa somewhere, but that would be ridiculous. Right?

BECAUSE. SANTA. YES.

So, have I told you that you're awesome and a genius? I love this. And yes, I would've shot you for not including the italicized parts. :P I love that Cal is hesitant and Gillian takes charge. Guh. Yes. Awesome. Even the angsty part before this. ♥

[gwassh0ppa]

I love making them all atypical, because I can totally see Foster being a boss in the bedroom. I can also see Cal enjoying that side of her, bc honestly? He totally has the dom/submissive thing going for him ;)

Thank you so much for you vereh kind words. Makes me glow :)

[baby8love]

i have loved every part of this series. thank you so much for writing this! and writing it all so well too. fabulous job!

[gwassh0ppa]

thank you very much :) I am quite glad you enjoyed it, and even happier that you let me know! Thanks!

[midnightblue17]

my shipper heart died and went to heaven. this is the perfect final installment.

i think i've read this three times. the first time was as is. the 2nd time, i separated the italics from the non-italicized bits. lovely read!!! :D

thanks for making my day. i've been looking forward to this ever since you replied to my comment in the 5th installment. ;)

[gwassh0ppa]

Yeah, I've read it various ways too. I did that to figure out how to take it:) It's always interesting as a reader to see how the writer composes sthg... well. To some people it's interesting :)

Thanks for reading and commenting, I always look forward to your comments!

[vivrebarefoot]

I'm all flaily and squeed out. In the space of 36 hours I got to read this fic and watch a Callian kiss (super hot by the way). This is a piece of SHEER GENIUS!

I love that it is two distinct and seperate pieces merged into one. It reads great straight through and each piece is also complete. The spacing was masterfully crafted, beautifully composed. I liked that the sex wasn't explicitly thrown in our faces. It was hinted at, teased at, held tanalizingly close. And then you left the rest up to our more than capable imaginations. Brilliant. Simply brilliant.

I have read this series from beginning to end and have to say that it is one of my favorite Callian fics to date. So thank you for all your hard work.

[gwassh0ppa]

I am so happy you enjoyed it. I'm even happier that you called it genius :)

I'm not a fan of explicit sex, that's a dirrrty as I get. And besides, I like imaginations to take hold at some point.

Thank you for your kind words. Make me happy :)

[aleia_jade]

I can't do video here, which means I can't watch the new episode for several hours, so it's Comment on Goodfic tiems.

This chapter made me uncomfortable, and I mean that in the best way possible. I love your writing style, and you nail the characters perfectly, especially with their little quirks and intimacies. Given how realistic they come across, reading about them being intimate-intimate is kind of awkward, even this tastefully prosed. I maybe blushed. They just seem so ~private (okay, mostly Foster), you know?

Conundrums aside, hooray for happy stories. :)I liked it.

[gwassh0ppa]

Aw. I'm sorry I made you uncomfortable. I know how you feel about Lightman/Foster. At least you got to read it though. I do appreciate your opinion, especially how you felt about that kind of intimacy. I do agree, I feel she would be more private, so valid point.

Glad you liked it :) Thanks for commenting.

[aleia_jade]

Aw, you don't need to be sorry. I knew where this was going.

[gwassh0ppa]

Yeah, especially since I'm unabashedly pro ship for them. Still, thanks for reading :)