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Mamihlapinatapai 5/6

Aug 29, 2010 09:00

Title: Mamihlapinatapai 5/6
Pairing: Cal/Gillian
Disclaimer: LtM not mine
Summary: A look shared by two people with each wishing that the other will initiate something that they both desire but which neither one wants to start. For Pineapple.
A/N: NOMNOMNOM ANGST. Thanks for commenting everyone!
( You've ruined me )

Comments 10

baby8love August 29 2010, 13:54:26 UTC

mmm...after all the lightness, a little bit of angst is very welcome. you write so beautifully, i dunno what else to say. loved it! can't wait for the conclusion in this series. :)

gwassh0ppa August 29 2010, 23:20:05 UTC

loving it will always suffice. AND ANGST. NOM. Always necessary. Conclusion up later tonight! Thanks for commenting :)

midnightblue17 August 29 2010, 15:31:37 UTC

there will come a time where they will run out of excuses not to be with each other.. but till then, i'm loving the angst (though crack!fics are awesome!) :) this is very well-written chapter. i'm a fan! :D

since your next post would be the last of this series (noooo!), hope you throw in bits of fluff in it.

gwassh0ppa August 29 2010, 23:21:08 UTC

I SOLEMNLY SWEAR THAT I AM UP TO NO GOOD. Thus, i cannot say whether or not there is fluff. ONLY conclusion. Up later. THanks for commenting!

vivrebarefoot August 29 2010, 21:42:17 UTC

Part 5/6 definitely took a turn. An angsty feeeeelingssss laden turn. I loved it because it was so yearn-ful and wanting and that is so how their relationship is sometimes. You really seem to capture their relationship from all angles.

I can't wait to see what you do with the finale!

gwassh0ppa August 29 2010, 23:22:04 UTC

Haaa. feeeeelllllliiiinnnnggggssss. I like angles. They're pointy and sharp and have so many perspectives :)
Thanks for your kind words!

amy_119 August 30 2010, 01:25:54 UTC

Loving this story. And this: Next thing you know, she's bid you a silent goodnight and your forehead is thudding against your front door, wishing you had her pressed against it instead. Just awesome. =D

gwassh0ppa August 30 2010, 23:05:32 UTC

Thanks! That is quite painful, isn't it? MMMMmmmm angst. Delicious. Thank you for commenting!

aleia_jade August 30 2010, 17:04:47 UTC

Oh, real life and complications, why do you have to butt in and ruin my cloud castles? I suppose if there's going to have to be sadness, I'd rather it be beautiful like this.

gwassh0ppa August 30 2010, 23:06:22 UTC

Yeah, sadness. It happens. Had to cover the spectrum of emotions with this. The last chap is more happy-making, I assure you :)
Thanks for commenting :) TTYtonight!!!