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Mamihlapinatapai 2/6

Aug 27, 2010 21:27

Title: Mamihlapinatapai 2/6
Pairing: Cal/Gillian
Disclaimer: LtM not mine
Summary: A look shared by two people with each wishing that the other will initiate something that they both desire but which neither one wants to start. For Pineapple.
A/N: Thanks for reading and extra thanks to those who comment :)
( There is always a point of no return )

Comments 10

baby8love August 28 2010, 02:15:35 UTC

i was just getting ready for bed and thought i'd check to see if there was anything juicy to read/see before i slept and lo and behold! ty!!! :D

and good gawd, it really amazes me how hot these ficlets of yours can be without a smidgen of x-ratedness. great job!

vivrebarefoot August 28 2010, 18:49:12 UTC

it really amazes me how hot these ficlets of yours can be without a smidgen of x-ratedness. great job!

THIS THIS!

Oh, and Cal, she is too much for you to handle! *gigglefest*

gwassh0ppa August 28 2010, 23:45:52 UTC

Thanks. I bet she really is too much for him, because she'd be like... the caboose driver on the hottamaletrain. Yeah, I went there. Still FOSTER FTW!!!

Thanks for commenting!

gwassh0ppa August 28 2010, 23:44:57 UTC

well. check before you go to bed tonight too:)

I'm glad it's supplying the adequate does of hot before bedtime :) I like to call it prude!smut. My specialty :)

crumpled_up August 28 2010, 02:24:42 UTC

Oooh. I'm loving this. I love second person POV. I know it's not something that others enjoy but it's a secret pleasure of mine. :P I love how Foster gets Cal off his game and that she almost takes pleasure out of it. So hot.

gwassh0ppa August 28 2010, 23:47:19 UTC

I fall into second person as a reflex, so when I feel like messing around with other things, second person is my comfort zone. Yeah, it isn't everyone's favorite ( i wrote like... a ten chap bones story in 2nd person. was fun)
Foster would delight in taking Cal off his game. But then again, who wouldn't?

catushy August 28 2010, 03:43:35 UTC

*gggg*
Is it too much if I keep asking for MOARRRR?
'Maybe it's her that's too much for you.'
Amazing cliffhanger!

gwassh0ppa August 28 2010, 23:48:06 UTC

THANKS!!! No it's not too much to keep asking for more, I quite enjoy that part ;)
Does it really come off as a cliffhanger? I was curious. Thanks@

logicisfailing August 28 2010, 05:40:35 UTC

I liked the first chapter (obviously, since I'm now reading the second, lol) but I REALLY liked this one. I'm not sure what it is about this chapter in particular, but it works very well. Two chapters in one day? I'm feeling spoiled!

gwassh0ppa August 28 2010, 23:48:52 UTC

I'm glad you REALLY like this one. It is more focused and in Cal's pov, perhaps that's why you enjoy it?
Be spoiled!!!! THANKS for commenting :)