Comments | gw_dark: (fic) Suppressive Maturation (oneshot)

masa_reforged in gw_dark

(fic) Suppressive Maturation (oneshot)

Dec 02, 2010 16:26

Suppressive Maturation ( Read more... )

author: masa_reforged, quatre, angst, 3x4, oneshot, fiction

Comments 1

ederyn December 3 2010, 07:19:51 UTC

Oooh, awesome that you're still around, and writing fics! This is a great study of Quatre's thoughts. I'd change the word 'rapture', unless you really did mean that Quatre spent hours in fearful bliss. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with it.