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[Fic] Challenge: MarySue - "Acts of God"

Mar 27, 2010 05:07

Title: Acts of God
Author: Jak Frost
Rating: PG (cause nothing is actually explicit)
Word Count: ~300
Warnings/Comments: Choose your own pilot!

( It was stupid. So very very stupid. He should have double-checked his target and not relied solely on the intel streaming across his Gundam’s screen. )

author: jak_frostty, gen, war, challenge: relena / mary sues, oneshot, fiction

Comments 6

ederyn March 27 2010, 14:48:00 UTC

Ooooh, I know this is pick your own pilot, and ordinarily I'd pick Trowa over anyone else, but for some reason this one screams Wu Fei to me. I can just picture him hating himself for making such a slip up. So glad this challenge inspired you to post this!

jak_frost March 27 2010, 22:06:17 UTC

Duo is totally my favorite, so I had a hell of a time making sure his voice didn't become overpowering in this. I'm so glad it worked!

I really liked this challenge. I might even have a second one brewing... XD

ederyn March 28 2010, 04:47:04 UTC

Awsum! I hope you do! *waits for you to post it*

motley_sis March 28 2010, 19:45:38 UTC

Ack! That's quite a bad hangover there. (ó_ò)[_]3 Agreeing with E about Wu Fei's ability to beat himself up over past mistakes, but whichever pilot mucked up here has my sympathy.

Thanks for your submission, Jak!

jak_frost March 29 2010, 04:13:40 UTC

Thanks muchly! I think I'm starting to see where you guys were seeing Wufei in this.

Also, 'hangover'?

motley_sis March 31 2010, 22:35:56 UTC

Hee! Truth be told, I see him everywhere these days. ^^;

'Hangover' was intended analogically... perhaps it's a more common phrasing in my own language (Dutch). I meant that the failure of the protagonist must give him headaches now.