[Fic] GW500 prompt - Clockwork, I Walk The Line

May 05, 2011 16:48

Title: I Walk The Line
Author: lil_1337
Pairing/Characters: Trowa, mention of Zechs, Quatre, and Heero
Rating: G
Word count: 580
Warnings/Kinks: Set within the five sentences universe immediately before ‘A Dangerous Mind’.
Summary: For the gw500 prompt clockwork.
Disclaimer: Trowa belongs to whoever he says he does and that is all there is to it.

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quatre winner, milliardo peacecraft/zechs merquise, trowa barton

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cailamaia May 5 2011, 23:54:05 UTC
Intriguing. I hope Heero manages to sniff something out for them. And it's nice to see the mechanics of the mentioned relationships emerge and take shape the way they do.

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lil_1337 May 6 2011, 00:07:36 UTC
I suspect he will. One of the things I really like about the 5 sentences universe is that there is a lot of room and you get a chance to see how the characters work as well as what makes their relationships tick.

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cailamaia May 6 2011, 00:11:20 UTC
Good. :) And I can see that. It sounds like something that would be fun to toy with.

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storyfan May 6 2011, 05:21:12 UTC
Such gorgeous imagery! I enjoyed the analogy of thoughts being like mismatched socks in the clothes dryer, as well as the reference to a spider's web.

Great job!

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lil_1337 May 7 2011, 02:37:33 UTC
Thank you. I love painting word pictures so I'm glad they worked.

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paranoidpen May 7 2011, 13:13:20 UTC
Wow that was well done. :3
Where is this 'Dangerous Mind' bit?

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lil_1337 May 8 2011, 01:28:43 UTC
Thank you. It was interesting to write and play with the imagery.

A Dangerous Mind is part of the 5sentence fics Universe. You can find it here: http://gw500.livejournal.com/309226.html#cutid1

The link to all the fics in the universe is here: http://lil-1337.livejournal.com/tag/5sentence%20fics%20universe

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tyreling May 13 2011, 02:55:56 UTC
Hoo, this is really nice. I like how Trowa's thoughts go back and forth between serious business and then to Quatre.

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lil_1337 May 13 2011, 02:57:55 UTC
Thank you.

He's just a little bit distracted by Quatre.

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