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(fic) Women of Summer - Hilde - Battle for Happiness

Jul 17, 2009 11:37

'Battle for Happiness'
Author: Masamune Reforged
Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing or the characters.
Characters: Hilde, Duo, unnamed OCs
Warning: All audiences, Gen fic, friendship
Word Count: 727

For gw500 's challenge #275 'Hilde'

( The greatest battles are fought inside of us )

275 - women of summer - hilde, hilde schbeiker, duo maxwell, gen fic

Comments 6

darthanne July 17 2009, 23:05:55 UTC

I like this. It fills out the scene nicely with some insight into both of them.

masa_reforged July 18 2009, 12:59:39 UTC

thank you. to be honest, i was just glad i could finish something. it's not my best, not by far, but i wanted to get something done, particularly because i recently re-watched that episode and Hilde has grown on me during the re-watch

nagi_schwarz July 18 2009, 01:27:42 UTC

Duo was really in-character for me, goofy and cheerful without being an utter whack-job. Well done!

masa_reforged July 18 2009, 13:00:58 UTC

thank ya. to be honest, most of the part with Duo I took straight out of the scene itself, so i didn't have much chance to take him out of character! ...

lil_1337 July 18 2009, 02:35:10 UTC

Very nice. You've done a good job of showing both Duo and Hilde's mindsets without beating us over the head with it.

masa_reforged July 18 2009, 13:01:57 UTC

i didn't want this one to get too long, and i'm trying to be a little better about making things understood without always explicitly stating them. thanks for the support!