[merlin] what happens next

Mar 12, 2010 02:58

Notes: Oh my god, this fandom is so talented and I'm feeling a little ten years old and kinda chubby and in last year's bathing suit, vaguely terrified of even looking too hard at the pool. Alas, one of several plot bunnies that refuse to move until humored. I know fuck-all about England -- well, that and Arthurian legend, for that matter (and ( Read more... )

genre: angst, type: one-shot, genre: slash, character: merlin, character: arthur pendragon, fandom: merlin

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starsystems March 12 2010, 10:46:41 UTC
ohh, this was really good! I loved all of it and I loved that it was from Arthur's POV. I can't even tell which parts were my favourites, because, really, I was going "YESSS" all the time while reading. I have a weakness for this kind of future fic, ugh. ♥ Can't wait to read more Merlin fic from you!

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arclights March 12 2010, 19:36:19 UTC
You know, I tend to gravitate towards Arthur's POV almost instinctively -- which is entirely weird since I am a Merlin person to the core, haha. I'm glad I could tickle your happy side for a bit! And I hope to have more for you soon-ish! ♥

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starsystems March 12 2010, 22:15:21 UTC
me too! I don't know what it is, but I find it somehow easier to write Arthur's POV. Even if Merlin is my favourite.

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lavellington March 12 2010, 11:27:08 UTC
Aw, that was really well written and I liked how affectionate Arthur was towards Merlin.
I also loved this:
He eyes Merlin speculatively. "This is another one of those 'you saved me when I wasn't looking' things, isn't it."
Lovely work.

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arclights March 12 2010, 19:37:33 UTC
Arthur's affection makes my heart swell at least two sizes; he's kind of crap at it sometimes, but he definitely tries.

Thank you so much!

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tearful_eye March 12 2010, 11:41:15 UTC
that was beautiful!
i really like it a lot, ♥

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arclights March 12 2010, 19:38:08 UTC
Thank you so much!

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claddagh_girl March 12 2010, 11:50:49 UTC
That was beautiful. There's no other way to describe it. ♥

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lemniciate March 12 2010, 12:13:01 UTC
You absolutely do belong at the pool-side! I loved this. It's wonderful that we get to see Merlin's reactions through Arthur's eyes. I love the understated and unspoken love between the two, and how the banter is undeniably Arthur and Merlin. Really, really great. ♥

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arclights March 12 2010, 19:39:58 UTC
It's sweet of you to think so. ♥ I'm glad you liked it, thank you!

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