[hakuouki] like knives

Jul 29, 2011 02:11

I kind of fell in love with this prompt/pairing, ngl.  Gonna blame a lot of this on City and Colour, whose discography I am working through for the first time -- and incidentally where I stole the title from.  Thank you, anon requester; hope I can deliver the goods despite being pretty rusty with the smut.  Prompt is pretty basic; um, Saitou, ( Read more... )

fandom: hakuouki, type: flash fiction, character: kyuuju amagiri, type: one-shot, genre: slash, character: hajime saitou, genre: porns, challenge: drabbble meme

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minjanna_yaoi July 30 2011, 15:09:24 UTC
I must de-anon myself because I want to thank you properly! This is absolutely amazing! *_* I KNOW I'm not the only one who has thought about this pairing, it just seems to be a sin to admit it out loud... I'm not afraid of it, I will pimp this fic to everyone!

Your careful research shows; the little details make this fic hauntingly gorgeous to read with strong visuals. When I'll do fanart of this, knowing what tree they're humping under is great! ;3

I'll try to unthink Saitou's fundoshi scarf now... If it's clean, it's sexy, but men aren't famous of leaving fragrant underwear behind so no thanks for an unwashed fundoshi around Hajime's pretty neck! XD

Thank you for this marvelous fic!!!

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gunners_view July 30 2011, 21:38:44 UTC
Pffft, thank you so much! I just. idefk I was like 'Amagiri and Saitou ... really? Wait, yeah' and then suddenly there was magnificent tree sex and Saitou being his shy quiet self and for some reason Amagiri became sort of debauched and sometimes you just gotta roll with it. \o_o/ I seriously kind of fell in love with them, and uh. Would love to write more, actually. :> (idk? I think a lot of the not-so-pretty guys don't get love like they should. MY FAVORITES ARE GETTING SHUNNED, THIS IS SO SAD. D:)

Hah, thanks -- I was a little nervous because lol, white girl never even been to Japan, but I wandered from researching Kamogawa and it led to the forest, and then shrines and HOLY FUCK THEY SET THE MOUNTAINS ON FIRE THAT IS THE COOLEST. I was whining all over plurk about spending more time researching than writing, so I'm kind of ridiculously glad those things came through. x3 Also, oh shit, fanart. I am yours. ♥ (gyay ( ... )

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your icon is the cutest, holy shit ♥_♥ arclights July 31 2011, 17:02:48 UTC
Careful with that, nosebleeds an be pretty messy little dudes. x3; I -- actually, I'm so new to the party I really hadn't either, but then I did and was like yeah, hetero life mates who sometimes occasionally fuck each other's brains out, I can roll with that because I am both shameless and horrible. Like I said above, I'd love to write more. Maybe a 'five ways Amagiri made Saitou scream' because apparently Big, Tall and Attractively Bearded became a bit of a dirty old oni in my head, idefk. .__.

And ... oh man, blushing ukes. Hahaha I can't even -- not involving the Shinsengumi. Even if there was both blushing and being an uke involved. And yes. You caught that? I understand that Miburoshi was an insult, but I kind of think intent is half the game, and Saitou tends to pick of wolf nicknames in a few different canons.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. xD Looking back through it, there's really at awful lot in there to justify all that research, but it was there.

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manaika August 3 2011, 21:42:10 UTC
Spare fundoshi? Seriously? Saitou?
... *thinks about it*
OK, I admit the appeal. (No, I won't be able to unthink it...not that I mind, thank you very much)

Back to the topic (that didn't start up untill now actually)
It was really nice and cute and so so in character. It shows from the first sentence how much work and research you put into this and seriously, it make sit all the more better. You've got my respect!!! (And fanfiction authors don't have a life, so don't worry about that...and neither do rp players, while we're at it)

I like your style! It's easy, fluent, natural, enjoyable... (And what does it say about me that I'm replying to it short before midnight? Ah well.)

Lookin' forward to more!

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arclights August 3 2011, 22:10:34 UTC
WHAT IS THIS FANDOM. I was expecting screams and kyaaa you're hideous but noooo. NEVER CHANGE. ♥

Hah, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. x3 I don't even know what hit me, but I have been sledgehammer'd by Amagiri/Saitou and am already like 2k into a five things meme that's making me blush. WAT DO? (Right? I am doubly buggered. D: And now forced to choose between fic and writing Hijikata app for my current game orz)

I'm so glad to hear it. x3 I aim to please? (It says your time zone is way different from mine, that's what.)

I will do my best to provide just that! o7 Definitely got enough on the plate, haha.

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manaika August 4 2011, 19:38:15 UTC
♥ x3 Don't worry, not likely to happen! XD

Amagiri/Saitou has some appeal. All the Oni Pairings have appeal. There are so many possibilities there... *sigh* What the heck. I thought Prince of Tennis was yaoi heaven. (That's a tough one. Just...throw a coin or somehing. I always do that.)

You, do, trust me, you do. (Yeah, that too.)

I'm looking forward to replying then! ~.^

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arclights August 5 2011, 04:20:11 UTC
Some appeal? Gurrrrrrrl, I will make you a convert yet. I just. Oh man, hetero life mates who totally get down and dirty on occasion and dirty old man Amagiri scandalizing the shit out of quiet and proper Saitou forever. I never did PoT, but I rode the GW and Naruto bus for years; I might have broken my brain at some point, but in exchange give me two names and a prompt and I will stir up subtext like you can't believe. =3= (Hiji first; that has a time limit. After that comes the flailing?)

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theablackthorn August 5 2011, 11:56:37 UTC
Loved the detail's hun!

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