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OUFMU.

Oct 23, 2012 00:17

03. Title: The Forecast shows sun (1/2)
A/N: This is unfinished, but it definitely has two parts.
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Synopsis: Virginity? Virginity. Whose? Yours, you anus. (Yunho takes Jaejoong’s virginity as a favor to Changmin. He’s hopeful that no strings will be attached. Unfortunately, it’s never that simple - and both Jaejoong and Yunho ( Read more... )

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muramatsu_aoi October 23 2012, 04:33:11 UTC

spot?

muramatsu_aoi October 23 2012, 04:52:53 UTC

experimenting teenage yunjae <3 i really felt as though i was watching those coming-of-age movies.. and jae goes from nervous kitten to sex addict XD
thank you..

gucci_shoes October 23 2012, 16:56:51 UTC

LOL, yes. For that night he was out of control!

dilovesyunjae October 23 2012, 04:42:55 UTC

ouhhh..will wait for the 2nd part

gucci_shoes October 23 2012, 16:57:32 UTC

Thank you, I have already written it (because these are just unfinished pieces), and so I should be able to upload it tonight.

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gucci_shoes October 23 2012, 16:58:05 UTC

I'm sorry! I have homework I should be doing, too. :( Get back to work, silly! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

megumi_19 October 23 2012, 05:42:37 UTC

I love the plot cliche or not its one of my fave types of Yunjae fics ^^. Thanks or sharing! ^^ It's love and sexy too.

Yunho as your first, so damn lucky Jae. *waitiing patiently for part 2*

gucci_shoes October 23 2012, 16:58:37 UTC

It is so very cliche, so I had to write it. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

dreamweever126 October 23 2012, 05:44:48 UTC

woah... this... holy crap... you're good! were they at least using lube cause i swear i could almost feel jaejoongie's pain... and yunho, sweet yunho... whatever favor he owes changmin must have been so good for him to be given the chance to take jaejoongie's virginity. this was really... ugh! so raw! hahaha! anyway, makes me look forward to the next chapter for sure :)

gucci_shoes October 23 2012, 17:00:02 UTC

There was lube! Actually, where the time lapse is in the story, I have written out on my computer. Originally, this sex scene was incredibly long. I had to cut out a lot so that the story wouldn't become dry, but don't worry. I would NEVER skip the lube. Whoa, boy. What a nightmare for Jaejoong if I did that! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)