Fic: Dust to Dust, Ch. 2 (Adam/Hiro, Ando/Hiro)

[guanin]

Title: Dust to Dust (Ch. 2)
Rating: PG
Pairing: Adam/Hiro, Hiro/Ando
Previous parts: Prologue, Chapter 1
Summary: He’d steeled himself to feel nothing when Hiro next crossed his path, weeding any softness or affection out of his heart, but how could such a thing be possible? Wasn’t Hiro what he’d always wanted?Disclaimer: I own nothing but my own

Comments

[lea1santome]

en mi imaginación Adam en vez de estrangular a Hiro, le besa apasionadamente.

Adam está muy enamorado de Hiro, pero no quiere admitirlo.
¡que pesadito está Adam de que Hiro, lo traicionó!, es que adam no se entera de nada, ¡tan sólo eran buenos amigos, nada más!.
fue peor lo que hizó adam a Hiro ¡matar a su padre!

lo malo de viajar en el tiempo es viajar a otro pais, y no tener el dinero adecuado. menos mal que Adam tenía d´0lares.
Ando, debe tener cuidado con Adam, pues Adam se esta muriendo de los celos.
Ando, es el guardian de Hiro.
¿te das cuenta de que Adam quiere estar con Hiro a solas?
¡tengo ganas tremenda de que Muera Arthur

[guanin]

Pues claro, pero Adam puede ser tan tarado a veces.

Seguro que quiere estar sólo con él, pero Ando no lo va ha dejar tan fácilmente.

[lotus0kid]

Oh, Adam, just give it up already! You know you want to- you know you know you want to! *sigh* But he's just too stubborn, isn't he? Well, 300+ years is a long time to commit to a single idea. But still, it tears at my heart (in the good way, don't worry) to see him continually choose the negative over the positive.

Anyway, nice detail about Adam's hunger. I hadn't really thought about it before- just how hungry you would get while buried alive if you couldn't die. I bet he smells just wonderful too. Looking forward to the next chapter!

[guanin]

He is! It's maddening writing him sometimes, because he's constantly sabotaging himself and being such a duffus. But he's so damaged, poor guy.

Thank you! I was actually hungry at the time and then I thought, "hey! Wouldn't Adam be starving?"

[nwfairy]

If i ask pretty pretty please will you update? Cause this is so cute and wonderful :) <3

Turned into your stalker, apparently :)

[warpedsexuality]

This could be novel-length, and I would still read it in one sitting. I don't necessarily expect there to be any more of this story; I know how these things sometimes just stop happening, but dang! Loved it.

Re: Turned into your stalker, apparently :)

[guanin]

Thank you! It was meant to be a novel, but then it got complicated and I got frustrated and another novel came my way, so... It's not going to happen. I feel kinda bad for posting yet another WIP, but like you said, sometimes it doesn't happen.

Re: Turned into your stalker, apparently :)

[warpedsexuality]

Oh, you should never feel bad about posting WIPs! In my opinion that's one of the strengths of fanfic, that it's fresh and can develop (or 'run dry') as you go along. I wouldn't want to not have read the chapters of Dust to Dust that you did write. They're totally gripping and set my own imagination flying. :)

Re: Turned into your stalker, apparently :)

[warpedsexuality]

...and btw, iconlove :D