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guanin

Fic: Crimson Sunset (Part 3)

Jan 11, 2008 01:52

Title: Crimson Sunset
Pairing: Adam/Hiro, Adam/Ando, Hiro/Ando
Rating: R
Description: This is the last part of what turned out to be a series. The order goes: Screaming into the Wind,
Discovery,
Meeting.
First part: here
Second part: here
Summary: Ando gets a very unpleasant surprise.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my own words.

( I came around to tear your little world apart. And break your soul apart. )

ando/adam, heroes, hando, fic, kiro

Comments 16

tju_tju_tju_tju January 11 2008, 06:00:06 UTC

NHGIRWBHGIORH SO AWESOME *FLAILS* I really cannot even express how much I love this damn fic. It's just so, so perfect in so many ways and GUH YOU ARE AMAZING. *FLAILS AGAIN*

“This way,” I say, “he’ll have to live with it. Just like I have.”

FUCK. YES. I loved this line.

guanin January 11 2008, 06:31:25 UTC

Thank you very much! Your flailing flatters me enormously, as always.

pills_taker January 11 2008, 17:20:52 UTC

If there's a guy in the world you shouldn't lead on and then dismiss, that'll be Kensei.

He could give Sylar a run for his money in the 'batshit obsessed stalker' department.

guanin January 11 2008, 17:28:46 UTC

He could give Sylar a run for his money in the 'batshit obsessed stalker' department.

That he could. I've thought of Sylar a few times while writing this.

Thank you for the comment!

shaka_chan January 11 2008, 21:55:45 UTC

HOLY FUCKING SHIT AAAHHHH.

@_@ AMAZING.

AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

guanin January 11 2008, 22:34:23 UTC

Heee! I'm glad you liked it so much.

luna_silverwolf January 12 2008, 02:29:12 UTC

;akdoei;kd! Why?! Oh Why?! did you have to stop it right there?!?!?!

This story is absolutely amazing.

guanin January 13 2008, 04:29:16 UTC

*evil laughter* The better to tease you with, my dear.

Thank you very much for commenting! I'm glad you like it.

cherazz January 12 2008, 07:51:50 UTC

Damn, this whole fic series is awesome! I just finished catching up. Fantastic idea. I love the raw, carnal emotion between Ando and Adam. You really captured them well with the dialogue and the descriptions (i.e. Adam on Memories). My heart tugs for them both, but more so for Adam. I just want to hold him and help take the pain away, but don't we all? =D Great job, especially using Ando to both satisfy his curiousity and exact his revenge on Hiro!

guanin January 13 2008, 04:36:34 UTC

Thank you so much! I loved writing the Ando/Adam scenes. They bounced off each other really well.

Adam's situation is quite sad, the poor baby. But he is responsible for some of it, too.