The Happiest Place on Earth, Chapter 22

Dec 30, 2011 21:25

The following is a story that I have been tinkering with for a year and a half. I have gone back and forth on parts of it. It starts off on a rather heavy note, but lightens up to match the title. I can only “hope” it works for you all.

Pairing: Miranda / Andrea - ‘cause I just can’t seem to care about any others.
Caroline and Cassidy are with us on ( Read more... )

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medora_macd December 31 2011, 02:57:12 UTC
Dum da dum dum! Life gets real. Or surreal, perhaps. Crossing my fingers for Andy.

Really enjoyed the conversation with Richard or rather Miranda's control of it. Very believable.

So ... when's the next installment? Tomorrow? *g*

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gsdcow January 4 2012, 03:01:59 UTC
Oh, you....
I think Miranda had fun. Or I had fun. The lines do blur.
Life does go on. Will mom and dad be a mom and dad, or absolute idiots? You'll have to read to find out.

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flyhiwithme2 December 31 2011, 09:19:51 UTC
One great part about posting each chapter separately, is that I get to go back and refresh my aging memory by re-reading the previous chapter. So, 2fers if you will. And in re-reading chapter 21, I rediscovered my favorite line, "The name rolled off her tongue like milk chocolate; sweet, delicious, and so bad for you."

In this chapter, I loved how their lovemaking could possibly have led them to an emergency room, lol. The move and the discussion with the ex could also have led to serious disagreements, but it just brought them closer together. And I love these 11 year olds. Brava again.

Thank you and Happy New Year.

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gsdcow January 4 2012, 03:05:08 UTC
Glad you tagged that line. I actually came up with that, like, 4 stories ago. It has been waiting in line and was finally chosen.

I enjoy how Miranda is feeling secure enough to be more playful. Trust is the word.

The girls will be fun until teen angst sets in. I don't think we'll be with them that long in this universe.

Happy New Year back at ya

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jah728 December 31 2011, 16:01:34 UTC
Richard is an ass worried more about how the relationship reflects on him than impacts the girls. Loved the lines:
"...But if I notice any odd behavior from my girls, I will come after you.”
“Richard, they are entering their teen years. If that is the qualifier for your threat, you better have a lawyer on a very long term retainer.”
Andy and Miranda were very cute together.
Wonderful update. Thanks for the read.

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gsdcow January 4 2012, 03:07:56 UTC
Heehee. Thanks. Made me chuckle, too. Miranda is just a hoot. Pissed off or sarcastically witty, she just makes you want to laugh. I would expect she'd be fun in the sack, too.
Happy new year.

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