Anyone got time to look over 400 words from Marc Scipio's POV to see if it makes sense to people other than me? If you haven't read the line war, this won't make sense, but well, I've been meaning to write this.

Off to work on Depth of Field in the meantime.

ETA: Acquired two betas; thanks, everyone. I'll post it here or link to it here. KickA ( Read more... )