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springwoof December 17 2016, 14:12:03 UTC
I liked the idea of Connor & his sistEr Aidan opening a bookstore together, but in Haven? Brrrr! The scary vibe has started already! The dogs were an excellent touch for a bookstore--are they there for a plot reason, though? You tend to pay good attention to Chekhov's gun, and don't tend to include random elements for window dressing...

Marc! We love you, but stay away from Audrey--she's literally Trouble personified!

I think you hit a nice intersection of creepy and fascinating with the mirror at the beginning there.

Yay! Cool crossover--Highlander really is the Crossover Fandom.

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gryphonrhi December 17 2016, 23:22:03 UTC
::laughing:: Actually, they're Marc's dogs. The Chekhov's dogs aspect is that that's how Marc *really* gets people on his couch to talk. They talk to the dogs if they can't talk to him.

And yeah, there are reasons this is an AU. I don't think Aidan's crazy enough to move to Haven and Connor isn't if she's not.

The mirror is terrifying. I know what it is and it is *not* a McGuffin.

Yeah, HL crossovers are a blast.

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