"Ash & Iron," Forever Knight fic, gen

[gryphonrhi]

Another of LaCroix's Nightcrawler soliloquies. NB: Another creepy one, folks. Okay? You're warned.

Based off prompts from devohoneybee: ash, iron, conclave, covenant, melee, an image of moonlit branches

Rated: PG. I'll add it Added to the Lares & Penates section of my site tomorrow here.

Comments

[ithildyn]

Excellent! I know I always say this, but I love your LaCroix :)

[gryphonrhi]

Thank you!

[kickair8p]

And this time I'm taking the warning to heart! I'm going to bed -- I'll read this tomorrow.

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[kickair8p]

Read it over lunch -- muuuuuuuuuuch safer! If I could've read it while sitting in direct sunlight, I'd've done that too. How do you bring the undead so vividly to life???

Seeing more of the pater familias attitude, from the "this is right and proper" viewpoint. Hope you can slot some in between LaCroix and Vetter in that fic.

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[gryphonrhi]

Kicka, I swear to God, most of these, the sonuvabitch *dictates* them to me. I change maybe two words and give up and post it. Just...gah! He doesn't shut up. And yes, this needed a 'creepy' warning agreed.

::nodding:: Hey! That's how to fix that scene! EEEE! {{{hugs you}}} and runs away to write.

[kickair8p]

Ooooo, glad I could help -- especially with that fic!

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[nessa5]

eeep!
creeppy

you do LaCroix so well...

[gryphonrhi]

Thank you! And yeah, I'm learning to put creepy warnings on these.

[springwoof]

LaCroix's voice is perfect, as always.

and, yes, you also perfectly captured the scariness that can be a city at night, where the predators are fellow humans...

[gryphonrhi]

Oh, damn, thought I was caught up on feedback...

Thank you! Yeah, LaCroix is just *dark* lately. ::shrugs:: Oh, well, he lets me be cheerful elsewhere, I suppose.

[springwoof]

Oh, damn, thought I was caught up on feedback...

but what a delightful problem to have, eh?

[gryphonrhi]

::grins at you:: Delightful, but embarrassing.

[katfairy]

Very creepy. Although at the moment I'm finding nature a bit more intimidating than any human ever born, even a week after the fact. (West Minot doesn't GET flash floods!)

[gryphonrhi]

Sorry I'm late replying... yeah, Nature can be terrifying. (as I watch the Gustav coverage...) Glad you liked!