My game, reviewed.

[gryphonk]

Another in my Game Chef updates. My first reviewer (there are 4, I think) posted his review, and you can read it here. I'm not satisfied with the results mainly because most of the problems stem from the fact I wrote the game in a hurry, and I believe I could have fixed many of them. However, it also means I got some solid ideas there, and I hope

Comments

[themoniker]

I read the game when you posted the link to the PDF and was pretty impressed by its relative completeness (and the changes you made from the original concept). I agree that a lot of this reviewer's criticisms relate to problems that could have been fixed with some more editing. I think that the tactical elements (mentioned briefly) probably need more elaboration. I liked the ritual nature of a session, which he seems to found stifling.
Are you going to playtest this? Is anyone else?