Five Years Later, chapter 4

[gryff_of_grace]

Title: Five Years Later [Paire Round Robin]
Rating: PG-13
Summary: We've seen the dark future brought on by New York's destruction...but what does the future hold now?
Previous Chapters: Prologue - Chapter 1 - Chapter 2 - Chapter 3
A/N: It was so exciting and nervewracking to write this chapter. :) I really hope that everyone likes it. Thanks so

Comments

[nayden]

It was so exciting and nervewracking reading it natalie ^_^ .... even second time round. You've really opened things up here. Particularly loved the peter/sylar interaction, the hate/hate thing happening is priceless and you explained elle perfectly. Giddy for more, good luck the next person to write :D

[gryff_of_grace]

Eee, thanks so much! The Peter/Sylar stuff was mucho fun to write. :D

[nayden]

it was awesome to read my dear *wink*

[joanna_484]

I love Mohinder's power frequency scale and that this woman who's off the charts on this scale is Elle! The fact that she and/or her dad can't stand that others have powers as well is a great reason for them to have captured and imprisoned both Peter and Sylar, who both have multiple abilities :)

You've related Peter and Sylar. Hooray! And hello Paire :D

This is a truly great chap, Nat, that follows really well the previous ones while also offering up exciting new info and possibilites :)

[gryff_of_grace]

Thank you, Joanna, I'm really glad that you liked it! I was so nervous about this!

Oh, shnap!

[cold_queen_5]

That's one majorly awesome chapter right there.

Funny, ironic, and amusing as all get out.

GREAT JOB. LOL. We got some answers, we got some new questions! This is McGreat, it is, it is!

With each chapter this story is just getting better and better!

(I had the best idea ever when I started this!)

Re: Oh, shnap!

[gryff_of_grace]

You truly did have an awesome idea. It's so great to see people just building on one idea and it's really interesting seeing everyone's writing styles! I'm lovin' it. :D

I'm really glad you liked this! :D

I was wondering, would you mind if I posted it to other communities, too? Spread the love and all that. :)

Re: Oh, shnap!

[cold_queen_5]

I don't mind if you post it to other comms.

[dragonydreams]

Dun dun dun. They're not going to like being brothers. Peter morally won't be able to kill his brother. I'm curious as to which way Elle acquires powers - is she like Peter and absorbs them naturally or does she take them by force, like Sylar? And is she Thompson's daughter or someone else at the Company?

[gryff_of_grace]

They're not going to like being brothers. Peter morally won't be able to kill his brother.

Exactly. Which is why sneaky Elle told them - she knew that would get them to work together. :)

Elle doesn't acquire powers, though. Peter and Sylar both acquire powers, though in different ways, but all of the powers that Elle has are natural. She was born with them. :)

[ohbrilliant]

What a great chapter! I really like that we find out why Peter and Sylar were captured and OMG they're brothers?!! The introduction of Elle was really cool and I love the Peter/Sylar banter xD hehe.

[gryff_of_grace]

Thanks, hon, I'm glad you liked it. :D