Nitpicky Spelling and Grammar Time! (Decipherable typos not included.)
"to never be read" - Try to not ever split infinitives. It should be "never to be read". No "o" in "hydraulics". I think Star's home planet is spelled "Tameran", but I'm not sure.
And the actual review.
Before even reading it, I and, like, eight other people squeed.
You know and write the characters so well that I can actually picture this scenario going on. And I don't know how many more ways I can say that I love it. So yeah. Write more, please.
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"to never be read" - Try to not ever split infinitives. It should be "never to be read".
No "o" in "hydraulics".
I think Star's home planet is spelled "Tameran", but I'm not sure.
And the actual review.
Before even reading it, I and, like, eight other people squeed.
You know and write the characters so well that I can actually picture this scenario going on. And I don't know how many more ways I can say that I love it. So yeah. Write more, please.
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