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The Sum of His Parts Ch 2

Jun 29, 2009 19:40

Title: The Sum of His Parts by gruaig_rua
Rating: PG-13
Series: Doctor Who/Torchwood

Characters: The Tenth Doctor (both of them), Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Rhys, PC Andy, Mickey, Martha.
Spoilers: Set post Journey's End, pre Children of Earth.
Summary: The Other Doctor achieves the supposedly impossible and returns... But why?

Chapter One

Chapter Two

( “We don’t have ID cards.” Jack replied from his office in the Hub. )

the sum of his parts, fic

Comments 4

wiggiemomsi July 2 2009, 02:30:39 UTC

VERY nice chapter! I really like the interaction between Martha and Jack. And such a mystery!! Hope you post again soon?

*Hugs*

gruaig_rua July 3 2009, 10:04:24 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it.

persiflage_1 July 6 2009, 13:40:21 UTC

Loved this:

Jack pouted. “My way is more fun.”

“Your way will spark a manhunt!”

“Spoilsport.”

“Drama llama!”

I love Jack and Martha so much!

Two other things - 1) You've got 'pouring' for 'poring' in there, and (2) You might want to put links on each chapter to the next/previous one to make it easiler for people to navigate between them.

gruaig_rua July 7 2009, 22:50:47 UTC

Thanks for the heads up. I'm editing, now that my connection is working again! Links will appear to the next chapter at the end.