boys' night out

Aug 15, 2007 20:03

sometimes he can walk like he’s not wearing a dress ( Read more... )

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(i.e. tomorrow afternoon) silencedsparrow August 16 2007, 04:19:05 UTC
fucking incredible man, this is some of your best work. you've never used repetition&variance so well--and neither have I. (the title is incredible)

I don't know if you intended this or not--viewed objectively, this is a stunningly well-executed metaphor for the homosexual condition. if that was deliberate, job well done monsieur; if this is just a wayward interpretation, well... anyone who reads this who doesn't know the author would probably view it that way.

of course, our neverending half-playful "is the other one gay?" dynamic just makes this comment ridiculously improper. maybe it's just because (by chance) I've been hearing/learning a lot about sexual diversity issues lately; maybe it's just because I spoke with timothy tonight (haven't seen the guy in AGES) and you know he gets me a'thinkin.

maintain 30,000 feet cptn. wilson; the HMS Chachi will be ready for docking in 2 days. next rendezvous: 1300 hours

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Gender anonymous October 18 2010, 18:38:43 UTC
I loved how you played with gender in this poem. Very thought provoking to read!

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