APH: Put On Your Masquerade (4/?)

Mar 26, 2010 00:09

Title: Put On Your Masquerade (4/?)
Author: grosse_averse
Characters: ...a lot D: - in this part, Netherlands, Belgium, Luxembourg (OC), Ukraine, Estonia, Russia, Canada, Prussia, England, France, America
Rating: Probably PG-13, for some make outs
Summary: The All Hallow's Eve dance is a great way to meet up, break up, make out. Based on a prompt from 52_flavours, and in ( Read more... )

luxembourg, belgium, hetalia, america, netherlands, fanfiction: hetalia, le lys & la rose, au, russia, canada, england, france, ukraine, estonia, prussia

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nivell March 26 2010, 07:36:34 UTC
Lol, Protective!Alfred and Ivan interrupting Matt's makeout session was hilarious.

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grosse_averse March 26 2010, 23:21:56 UTC
Haha, and probably also incredibly scarring D:
Thank you for commenting!

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choco_bani March 26 2010, 08:00:01 UTC
... I love your fics. :3

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grosse_averse March 26 2010, 23:22:31 UTC
Aw, thank you! <3
I love your icon~

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cosplay_thief March 26 2010, 11:46:23 UTC
I think both Ivan and Alfred have a cockblocking radar implanted in them. That's the only way I can explain why they seem to just be there when their siblings are about to make out.

Oh boy, for some reason I want to tear up my hair when an author decide to go for the classic "clichéd conflict that remains unresolved before the end of the chapter". Must be some kind of writer's rule or something.

Alfred you dummy! You better kiss back Ivan by the end of the dance or I'll be mad at you.

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grosse_averse March 26 2010, 23:23:25 UTC
They must. And I bet they both abuse it horrifically.

IDK when the chapter's going on for too long and you need a way to end it, you always end up ending it right at that spot.

Haha God forbid nobody wants you to be mad at them D:

Thank you for commenting!

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niki_uchiha March 26 2010, 12:35:46 UTC
oh no! alfred shouldn't have made that joke about katya...ivans going to kill eduard!

i think a vampire costume would be more suitable for gilbert since he kinda looks like one to begin with =)

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grosse_averse March 26 2010, 23:24:12 UTC
Ivan is pretty much going to hunt down every guy in school and beat them, just in case.

I know right? I think he would actually make small children cry.

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chromatic_coma March 26 2010, 22:28:59 UTC
God, you just get more and more epic with each passing update, don't you? This is just amazing.

Katya is such a cool girl. I wish she was so empowered much more often. Ivan had better learn to back off, before big sis gets furious.

But, I am proud of Ivan for kissing Alfred, though he ruined it by running away immediately after. What a horrible thing to do, Vanya! Stay there and claim your man! XD

Also, I have to agree with cosplay_thief, I feel bad for Matt and Katya with brothers like those two ^^;

Arthur + Glitter = WIN.

Thank you for updating~

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grosse_averse March 26 2010, 23:25:19 UTC
Haha aw :D Thank you for commenting!

Ukraine has the potential to be kick ass but mostly she just cries D: Which is kind of sad.

I'm not going to lie, kissing someone and having them go stock still on you is not something you usually want to stick around for - trust me.

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chromatic_coma March 27 2010, 00:08:55 UTC
It makes me pretty sad too. She has to be a strong person to have lived through so much, but she hasn't unlocked her full potential!

True, I'll give you that. Poor Ivan...

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