Title: Build Up, Part One
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grosse_averseCharacters: South Italy, Spain, with cameos from the rest of the "students" // for now, one-sided Spamano, because dammit, Spain shouldn't be the only one working hard for this fucking relationship. Also a hint of Netherlands/Spain later on.
Rating: PG-13, for Lovino's mouth, of course!
Summary: AU. Lovino's spent
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Poor Lovino~
I like the whole Lovino chasing after Antonio switch here, though. I hope everything works out in the end cause I'm not feeling too happy right now.
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I like this start! Poor Lovi. GO AFTER HIM ANTONIO!!
Always great to see your past La Lys & La Rose pairs coming in to play. What was Alfred doing at Ivan house? -eyebrow wiggle- /shot.
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Haha, well, they were looking after Natalia after school! What else would they be doing??
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first off, I love the way you have them interact here, and the way you write both of them. hahaha and the Vargas family house/household was just epic epic win :D
ahh and there are some lines that I liked particularly- like "bottle green" for Spain's eyes (thats it exactly) and Prussia's "The one who looked like he wanted to make out with you. Or beat you up. Either one." XDD
so yeah definitely looking forward to the next chapter! *fist pump*
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Poor Antonio never heard of tsundere before it seems. I hope it turns out okay for them, not that the soccer team needs more "boys in friendly/romantic relationship" in it. XD
Once again I need to add that this is really not a pairing that I read so I guess your writing makes me want to try something new from time to time.
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