APH: As If I Don't Have Enough Work to Do

Nov 19, 2009 10:50

Title: I Don't Really Know How To Tell You This, Part One
Author: grosse_averse
Characters: Canada, Prussia, England, France, and America - guest appearances/mentions of Germany, North Italy, Spain, Netherlands (OC), Ukraine // PruCan and minor FrUK
Rating: PG-13
Summary: AU When you have two dads and one jerk of a brother who all live in a rundown English pub ( Read more... )

north italy, i'm too busy to do any of my work, america, germany, fanfiction: hetalia, le lys & la rose, au, canada, prussia

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darkheart510 November 19 2009, 18:19:31 UTC
This is good! PruCan needs more looooove. I can't wait to see the next part!

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grosse_averse November 19 2009, 18:41:09 UTC
Definitely this pairing needs more love :)
Thank you for commenting

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soofichan November 19 2009, 18:25:37 UTC
Oh man, I love this pairing so much I always get so excited when I see fanwor for it. I really like your characterisation of Matt, how he's not flighty or spineless or intimidated by anybody, but still a quiet person. Too often he's depicted as a pushover when he's really not. But this! I loved it. :D

Can't wait for the next part! With some bickering/overprotective Arthur and Francis~

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grosse_averse November 19 2009, 18:42:26 UTC
I've really been loving this pairing as of late. I don't actually know why :S
Yes, thank you! I always saw Matt as being more subtle than his brother, but still quite North American. I mean, Canadians are definitely not pushovers, they're just...forgotten!
Thanks for commenting :)

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toastedpancake November 19 2009, 18:36:41 UTC
Prussia/Canada~ Ah, I can't explain it, but I am utterly in love with this pairing~.

Anyway, a wonderful first chapter. I love all the character interaction and the dynamics you've set up. It makes me really love forward to what's going to happen in chapter two.

And I mean, Jesus Christ, my father's hair goes down to his back, he looks like mother fucking Legolas

I nearly choked from laughing at that part. EXACTLY.

Gilbert swore, loudly, throwing arms around Matt to protect him.

asedfdfhfl;kf

If your aim was to make me melt into an incoherent pile of goo...good job.

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toastedpancake November 19 2009, 18:38:31 UTC
And, indeed, I meant to say "look forward", but my sheer joy at this story caused me to type "love". :]

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grosse_averse November 19 2009, 18:43:42 UTC
I'm really liking this pairing! It's grown on me.

Poor Germania, can't get any love D:

Hahaha, I mean, loving in a forward direction is always appreciated, though a tad confusing. I knew what you meant, though!

Thank you for commenting!

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theodorawasgood November 19 2009, 19:04:26 UTC
ooh, this was very entertaining! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
and i laughed hard imagining feliciano dancing and singing about pasta, good job!

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grosse_averse November 19 2009, 19:09:54 UTC
Thank you :)
Sometimes Feliciano needs to express his feelings for pasta in creative ways!!

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kazu_is_awesome November 19 2009, 19:54:10 UTC
Oh ♥

I want to read more!

This fandom needs sooo much more Love~
Pranada ♥

Just love those two ♥

And I love you for writing such a lovable FanFiction ♥

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grosse_averse November 19 2009, 21:28:18 UTC
Hahaha, thank you! I agree, Pranada definitely needs more love!

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