Done With You D/K fic, part one

[griva_x]

...for this Dean/Krycek fic to see the light. It's NOT the type of fic I' ve written before, so please read the info pre warning carefully.

However, i' m pretty happy how I managed to wrap it up. :)

Comments

[griva_x]

/makes innocent eyes/

Dude, did you read the warnings?????????? This is not the puppy!love fic!

But *of course*, there will be SOME development later. But no, they don't get married in the end! :)

[griva_x]

Hmmmmm. Y' know what, you go on like this, i will stop writing Dean/Krycek.

/pouts artfully/

[thandie]

Woa, me likes a lot

[griva_x]

Hey hey!

You' ll get the 2nd half soon, no worries. I just wanted to *set the scene* so to say, because the 2nd part is longer and more *complicated*.

Nah, Lyle is just...somebody. He's my *creation*.

You happy that Gordon's dead?

And Sammy, of course, will get mentioned. And John. /grins/ And Dean will get...a lesson, he'd think more with *his* head than relying on such assholes like Gordon.

He does seem like the kind of guy that would require that kind of personality in his 'sidekicks'. no really, I had to think about that a little, but I'm totally convinced now. Did i make sense? If Leon commented that Krycek had lush lips or beautiful jade eyes, THAT would' ve taken a point off. But Leon comments on K' s professional reputation of an interrogator, of course that' d rub Krycek in the right way, so to say. :)

Nah, Krycek making Dean swallow his own blood was my idea! A good idea (pictures it).

I bet you' ll have a lot to comment when I post the 2nd part. :)

Thank you!

[thandie]

Well, I almost didn't grasp it was Gordon because you only call his name to say he's death...but of course I'm not happy he's dead! I like Gordie :(

Poor Dean. I wanna see where Sam is indeed. Can we get to see Sammy in shining armor that comes to save Dean with brainy powers? ;)
And then you could maybe fit in a threesome *cough cough* *lol*

Dean+blood=OTP

[griva_x]

Can we get to see Sammy in shining armor that comes to save Dean with brainy powers? ;)
And then you could maybe fit in a threesome *cough cough* Gosh, you dream ON, girl! But I laughed at this suggestion because my beta,candygramme, sugested *exactly* the same. On which I replied that Sam can't come, because then I will have to choose who wins - Krycek or Sam, and sorry, I CAN'T choose! I can't see Krycek be defeated by Sam' s hand!

There is another option: Krycek can trap Sam and tie him up too. But I don't think he'd have the same chemistry with Sam as he has with Dean. But then...imagine that Dean will speak in a *different* manner entirely when Krycek had Sam in his...ahem...clutch.

/is evil to the core/

[ib_ratstruck]

Yay! More K/D! Okay, I admit I still haven't read all of SWSS yet, but still... You write it and if Krycek is in it, I'll read it eventually and know I'll enjoy it! I do have a stay at home vacation starting at the end of the month, so I'm sure I'll be able to do some major catching up then. Yay for new fic and one-armed Kryceks!

[griva_x]

Hey! Well, honestly, I' m not sure if you'd accept this Krycek...he is exactly as I sum him up in the Notes. But I'm looking forward to hear whatever you have to say.

And btw, I have SWSS put in one meta-post (if you noticed), so that all 10 chapters are accessible from one post.

[ib_ratstruck]

LOL! For me to read it, all that's required is that Krycek is in it, or mentioned! It can even be... *gasp*... het! I don't have to like or accept him... though it's super nice when I do!

I have all the parts of SWSS saved on my hard drive in my to-be-read folder, along with the other trillion stories not yet read. I sometimes wonder why I rejoice when there is new fic when I'm so far behind.

[warpedsexuality]

Oh, I like this! The description of Dean's reaction when Krycek twists the stick is totally accurate and evilly concise. And that goes for all of it. I believe the Krycek's actions - he uses the amount of force needed to get Dean to talk, which indicates that he's a professional and not a psycho, and still he also *likes* to make him break. I believe the response he gets from Dean. He's stubborn, but not to a fault. And all out of smartass remarks. /smirks/

The language is expressive and good, without the use of pointless fineries. The dialogue works perfectly.

And just a personal kink of mine: I love that the same person who roughed Dean up also patches him up. Sweet. As in, sweet for me, not necessarily sweet of Krycek. Like he said, it's just a practical measure.

LOVEly!!

So far, this is a great read for me. I don't know what will follow, but I'm eager and perhaps a bit anxious to see... :)

[griva_x]

YAY, you read it, finally. :) People's been asking for the 2nd part, but I wanted you to catch up!

without the use of pointless fineries Heh, I tried. THANKS! :)

As I said in the preface to the story, Krycek is ruthless, but not heartless. He's never a sadist, he's just doing his job. If Dean was a 'bit' smarter, he'd have kept answering Krycek's questions and he'd get away with minimal damage. But alas... Dean's still young.

So...I'm anxious too, of what your reaction would be what follows. I can always write off some OC reaction to 'kink' and 'fiction' later.

So, stay tuned!

[warpedsexuality]

/Gulp/ I hope I'm not too unpopular with your other readers for impeding the posting of the second part!

I guess there's a bit of pride preventing Dean from doing the smartest thing. I know I would be just a tad contrary if I had found myself in his situation. Anxious to escape with minimal damages, as you say, but also angry. So maybe that plays into his behaviour. Or maybe he's just young and stupid, hehe.

I can always write off some OC reaction to 'kink' and 'fiction' later.
So far, both men's behaviour is totally believable. Personally, I don't mind stretching realism a little bit in favour of kink, though... We'll see what you come up with! ;)

I'm going away on holiday soon, so cannot respond with feedback for a week, just so you know. I'll be in a cabin without internet, you see. But other than that, I will stay tuned!

[griva_x]

Heh. It's only Lu who knows I usually wait for you to catch up with reading, so no worries, you are popular with ME, that's what matters.

I' ll post more probably today, so if you manage to catch up, fine. If not, then I' ll be looking forward when you come back.

Have you finished watching Carnivale? I did, and you know, I was a bit let down how it was...(not) wrapped up. One can see with bare eye that they were just told their funds are cut, you have three more eps left. :(

Have a nice holiday! I wish I could go for another getaway. Thigs been pretty stressful lately.

[phantomas]

I WANT MOOOOOOOORE!!!!
I love one armed Krycek with a sick, twisted puppy love, I swear :)
Chief interrogator suits him very well, he's cold that way...and Dean knows his limits, which is gooood (poor Gordon, sigh). Wounded, bloodied, in pain Dean is utterly sexy.

(also, my guy has a knife like that...very handy *ggg*)

MOOOORE! Mean and dark, go meaner and darker if you like, I love it :)

[griva_x]

Hey hey!

Heh. So GLAD you find it in OC. And yes, this is just a warm up, it will get longer, darker and meaner and with us learning more about Dean through Krycek's eyes (you must have noticed I love to use this approach, to create Dean's image from the scratch in Krycek's mind). And no, there won't be any Sam, but in mention, as well as a John. /teases/

I'm totally there with you for the chief reason why I LOVE to write Dean alone - he's a different guy when Sam's not around. If Sam was around, he'd have never got in this mix, to start with. One yummy moemnt though...if Sam was here, tied up, Dean would have spoken in a different manner from the start. ;)

Looks like you' re the only one who checked out the knife. It's a handy thingie, elegant too, JUST for one-armed Krycek. Dean will appreciate Krycek's skills with the knife later. /grins wickedly/

Thank you for fb. Stay tuned for more!