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Without Windows or Doors: Chapter 12

Jul 29, 2005 10:33

Title: Without Windows Or Doors: Chapter 12
Author: laurelgardner
Rating: R for language
Pairing: Gil/Nick
Summary: Comfort fic, post Grave Danger. Gil and Nick go camping. Really.
Author's Note/Warnings: SPOILERS. And slowness.
Disclaimer: No attempt at copyright claims are being made.

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Comments 23

janissa11 July 29 2005, 16:31:19 UTC

Okay, well, that was probably not the very best thing to read at work in a childrens' ER. But god it's so damn GOOD. His flashback came out of NOWHERE for me, just la la la, ha ha ha, WHAM!

Fucking BRILLIANT, woman. Gahhhh.

laurelgardner July 29 2005, 19:54:34 UTC

His flashback came out of NOWHERE for me, just la la la, ha ha ha, WHAM!

Yeah, me too. I was just going to have them watch the movie, happy as clams, but then knightmusic asked a perfectly innocent question about what Nick would think of the live organ transplant scene...and yeah, WHAM! is right!

Glad you enjoyed it. I put the vomiting in just for you. Well, not really, but I thought of you while I was writing it.

janissa11 July 31 2005, 03:37:15 UTC

Yay! Vomit fetish! *beaming*

Hey, have fun in Trombone-Land!

Love this story!! anonymous July 29 2005, 16:49:29 UTC

I don't care how slow you take this, but this is the best post GD story yet. I think you really have a handle on the characters and Nick's reaction to everything seems so consistent with his character and what happened to him. I love Gil and Nick anyway, but this Gil and Nick are perfect. I can't wait for more!

Ryan Anne

munin July 29 2005, 16:49:53 UTC

I seem to keep starting all my comments to you with "I love" and really, this one is no exception.

I love the slow build to this. Nick starting to learn what Grissom is like away from work. The strength Gil shows when Nick needs him. The setting! Good lord the setting may actually get me to try camping it sounds so lush and lovely.

Nick's breakdown at the end was just heartbreaking. Poor dears, I want it to be over for our boys but I think that's a long way off.

Also? I can totally see Gil as a Monty Python fan.

elfinessy July 29 2005, 17:04:36 UTC

More......... please...............
This is touching and sad and so moving.....

carolina30363 July 29 2005, 17:15:38 UTC

I was going to post a comment telling that Monty Python’s The Meaning of Life is one of my favourite movie but....the liver scene...Nick reaction and gil..OMG I'm speechless...amazing and powerful