Salt (a hundred words about Albus and Gellert)

Dec 25, 2007 12:10

crossposted to albus_x_gellert

For the December 11th Salt prompt, something poetic:

Salt

100 words )

salt

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Thanks hohaiyee December 26 2007, 18:53:27 UTC
I was worried about it being too pretentious.

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ms_worplesdon December 26 2007, 16:15:22 UTC
Why, that's a poem! Beautiful.

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Thanks hohaiyee December 26 2007, 18:57:24 UTC
I swear I had wanted to go with sexy, "salty goodness" kinda smutty, but instead, it derailed into angst after the first line! After Albus's tears, there was just no way for me to bring it back to fluff or any sort of reconciliatory sweetness.

For the weeks I was stuck on "All came to nothing"...and then on Christmas eve, I was making a pioneer recipe Never-Fail Chocolate, that required whisking egg white into foam, and I have /that/ line which fits with the salt theme a little cause sea foam?

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