"Also, the naming thing was very deliberate for my part. Dani for the past and Reese in the present. Karen in the past, Davis in the present."
That was a nice touch. I also have been using differing names for Dani, especially. If she's in a self hating mode then she's Reese, at work, she's Reese, to Charlie she's Reese (until my last chapt, anyway) but her inner monologue and Charlie's inner thoughts about her..Dani. I love the way you used this, though, for both past and present tense. Very effective.
"She really doesn't like Stark and by extension, Juarez. I don't think Dani's quite forgiven Juarez yet for his remark re: Charlie from the pilot."
Couldn't agree more. Basically, she's loyal from the start, and she knows how to hold a grudge. Gosh, I have SUCH a girl crush on Dani. Hahahah!
"Thus the genesis of Dani putting her hair down for UC work was born."
Love this. Just LOVE IT.
Oh, and Echo Park! Once again, I'm smiling ear to ear. Wink.
Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying this. Ooh, I hadn't notice about the name change in you story, I have to go back and read (not a hardship, believe me!).
Couldn't agree more. Basically, she's loyal from the start, and she knows how to hold a grudge.
Man, I do not want to be on her bad side!
Gosh, I have SUCH a girl crush on Dani. Hahahah!
Hee. Same here, is it girl crush or girl amazement/awe? I think I'd do the 'you're awesome' repeat if I ever see Dani Reese too!
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That was a nice touch. I also have been using differing names for Dani, especially. If she's in a self hating mode then she's Reese, at work, she's Reese, to Charlie she's Reese (until my last chapt, anyway) but her inner monologue and Charlie's inner thoughts about her..Dani. I love the way you used this, though, for both past and present tense. Very effective.
"She really doesn't like Stark and by extension, Juarez. I don't think Dani's quite forgiven Juarez yet for his remark re: Charlie from the pilot."
Couldn't agree more. Basically, she's loyal from the start, and she knows how to hold a grudge. Gosh, I have SUCH a girl crush on Dani. Hahahah!
"Thus the genesis of Dani putting her hair down for UC work was born."
Love this. Just LOVE IT.
Oh, and Echo Park! Once again, I'm smiling ear to ear. Wink.
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Couldn't agree more. Basically, she's loyal from the start, and she knows how to hold a grudge.
Man, I do not want to be on her bad side!
Gosh, I have SUCH a girl crush on Dani. Hahahah!
Hee. Same here, is it girl crush or girl amazement/awe? I think I'd do the 'you're awesome' repeat if I ever see Dani Reese too!
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