Challenge #44: Pass It On Nick/Juliette, grief - Shards

[luthienberen]

ShardsThe shards of the future lay before Nick, their edges glistening so deeply red they shaded near to black. Nick felt a swelling tide build in his chest. Never before had he felt so much in a Grimm fairy-tale as now

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[lil_1337]

That was heartbreaking and so well done.

[luthienberen]

Thank you so much! :)

[luthienberen]

Thank you, glad I hit the right note! :)

[trobadora]

This is utterly lovely. ♥

[luthienberen]

Thank you so much, it is good to know I got the emotions right. :)

[synia09]

This is heartbreaking and beautifully written.

[luthienberen]

Thank you so much for your kind words. :)