All's Fair in War Chapter Three

[grimm222001]

Title:All's Fair in War
Chapter: 3
RatingPG-13
Status: Incomplete

As always, any feedback is greatly appriciated. :)

Chapter Three: Death’s MessengersHe was in a field; it stretched across the horizon, into eternity, burning such a bright white it scorched his eyes. Dark grass stalks, black as pitch, clustered at the base of the wooden pikes

Comments

[l_p_e_rson]

Don't mean to litter your journal with writings and I will admit I'm really not into gore but you wrote that well and I'll be happy to read more. Where will I find Chapters 1 & 2? I'm also refamiliarising myself with Live Journal, I'm not used to asking people to 'add me' and as your Journal doesn't seem to be 'Friends Only' is this appropriate? I have heard the term "Familiar" as you have described them and am interested to know more. Thanks for your time, L.

[grimm222001]

Litter? Of course you're not littering, lol. I'm glad you like the story despite the gore (it won't be like that all the time, that's not the main focus of the story).

Here are links to the previous chapters (guess I forgot to post the links this time around)

Prologue: http://www.livejournal.com/users/grimm222001/8533.html#cutid1

Chapter 1: http://grimm222001.livejournal.com/8724.html#cutid1

Chapter 2: http://grimm222001.livejournal.com/12330.html#cutid1

If you want to friend me go right ahead. If it's okay I'll friend you too. It's not necessary to be my friend to read my posts, but it's nice to just have friends, lol. That sounds corny ;P

[l_p_e_rson]

Oh, thank you very much! When I was younger I used to read my uncles war comics etc. and now my son's older friends are referring to FMA and the likes in their 'convo', so my interest has stemmed from that as I some times feel excluded for not knowing. I'll add you, yes it is nice to have friends that share your interests. [|:)=