Semper Fi, Chapter 3

[grimcognito]

            Marcus didn’t push him to continue; he simply waited for Daniel to gather himself, and Daniel was grateful for the small mercy. “Then he reached out for me. I couldn’t move, and he almost had me when his head blew up.”

That certainly had Marcus sitting up straighter. “Blew up?”

“Yeah. There was a really loud bang,

Comments

[emocezi]

Okay, I will read this and leave awesome comments. But just wanted to let you know, your LJ cut isn't working...and you should fix that maybe.

*toddles off to go read*

[grimcognito]

Thanks. Fixed now. :3

[emocezi]

AUGH WHY DID YOU STOP THEEEEERRRREEEEEE?!?!?!?!?!?!??!

*grabs you and shakes you*

IT'S SO GOOOOOD AND NOW I HAVE TO WAIT FOR LIKE..ANOTHER YEAR TO FIND THINGS OUT. D:

In other news. I FREAKING LOVED IT AND I'M EXCITED THAT IT'S STILL BEING WRITTEN AND YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

*draws hearts on your face and arms and dances around you like a crazy person and gives you an armful of baby kittens*

[grimcognito]

BECAUSE I WANTED TO TORTURE YOU.

*dances around too*

Hopefully it won't take another year for the next chapter. I promise to try harder! *teary eyes*

Thank you for the enthusiastic comment! :D

[grimcognito]

Thank you! Hopefully the next part won't take nearly as long to be finished. :D