The Banshee's Ambassador (prologue)

[grimcognito]

Title: The Banshee's Ambassador (Prologue)
Rating: PG-13 (for now)
Genre: Sci-Fi,  Fantasy, (eventual) Romance
Warning: Violence, aliens, my bad spelling
Author Notes: This is my original story, as in I own every bit of it. No stealing please and thanks!
Summary:Ambassador Jove is snatched from his planet by the infamous pirate known only as the Banshee

Comments

[havemy_heart]

I definitely vote for more! Opening it with action always grabs a reader's attention. I also like the brief glimpses into this world that you've given. A planet whose energy is music isn't something I think I've come across before. And the main character seems fun. I always like a protagonist who stands out among his own people.

I hope you decide to write and post more :)

[grimcognito]

Thanks for the feedback! It is definately a strong consideration for me to continue. I'll do a little more work on it and see if I like where it goes.

I will for sure post more, and probably a variety of different stories.

[haldoor]

Nice start; look forward to seeing more.

[grimcognito]

Thanks!