Comments | greywing: [fic] FMA: Steel

greywing

[fic] FMA: Steel

Jul 22, 2006 20:47

Really quick fic. It hit me and just had to be written. ;_; Spoilers for recent chapters (59-61). Feel free to point out typos/crit away. ZOMG, it feels like a long time since I've written anything for FMA. ;_;

( Steel [Hawkeye, Roy] )

fma, fanfic

Comments 10

midasu July 30 2006, 05:22:58 UTC

I wanted more in the manga to. This will probably always be what I picture about it now.

greywing July 30 2006, 05:30:58 UTC

Ok, that makes me sad. ;_;

momiji_k July 31 2006, 15:26:24 UTC

That was very good. That is an imagery I have been unable to complete in my mind. I do hope the manga will go further into their past. But we all just have to feel grateful that we have been given as much as we have.

Thanks for sharing a great fic!

saukijen August 2 2006, 21:28:09 UTC

*wow* That was beautifully written, awesome job!

arhena August 12 2006, 06:58:16 UTC

That was really beatiful. The imagery was so good. It makes you feel sorry for them.. just the way you wrote it made me sad. (which is good... 'cuz it was good)