The Not-So-Quick Fic: Suspicion AU (aka, Why the Athosians REALLY left Atlantis)

Dec 12, 2007 23:55

Okay, the last one, I swear. Despite the fact that I've now named the universe (thanks to
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sga:au, lightswitch, sga:fanfic, no ffnet

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annieb1955 December 13 2007, 10:16:08 UTC
I am just loviong these and this one is no exception and this line said so much

He resisted the urge to cross his legs, as that was an action unbecoming of an Athosian warrior such as himself,

Acutally that whole paragraph said so much about Halling.

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greyias December 13 2007, 21:00:44 UTC
Glad you're enjoying :) They're... well, they're really just crack to keep me entertained and distract me from working on my real stories. The day I have to make a tag for them will be a sad day indeed.

The thought of that muscle-bound Athosian from "The Siege, II" doing the potty dance amused me to no end... so it had to make it in as well ;)

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anonymous December 13 2007, 19:57:58 UTC
I had been hoping with "Missing" that we'd get at least a brief glimpse of the Athosians. I miss Jinto and Wex and Halling. Yes, Jinto and Wex are the John Sheppard and Rodney McKay of the Athosians. "Here, you can be the Wraith." "No, you can; I'm Major Sheppard." "Whoa!" Oh, and Halling could have pointed out that Weir hadn't believed Marta when she described the energy creature in "Hide And Seek".

Gayle

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greyias December 13 2007, 20:58:20 UTC
That's actually a pretty good suggestion (about Weir's dismissal of Marta)... I just have to figure out where to put it. I always found Elizabeth rather condescending towards the Athosians, which I attribute to poor writing than to the character herself. (I always found it hard to believe a highly trained diplomat would be so blatantly disrespectful towards other cultures/allies).

I really do miss the Athosians though, was very disappointed that they all left the city in the first place, and even more so when they were relocated to another planet.

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