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Jan 12, 2009 11:43

He became aware of his head pounding as he swam back to consciousness; his arms felt at once leaden and tremulous from the blast of electric current. He took a deep breath, his lungs aching as the air rattled in his throat.

Though his arms felt as though they were flailing uncontrollably, they were still tightly bound at the wrists to the ( Read more... )

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cynlee January 12 2009, 20:27:40 UTC
And the Oscar goes to.... Hamato Raphael!

*much applause and shouts from fan-girls everywhere*

Raph: Aww... jeeze, it was easy, ya know? When yer a well-trained ninja--

Mike: That's Ninja TURTLE, Bro!

*wild fangirl screams; security moves to protect Orange-clad turtle*

Raph: As I was sayin'... I gotta thank Master Splinter for
everythin' I know about honor and all that ninja stuff. I thank Casey for all the other stuff Sensei don't know about. Don-- thanks for whatever. I don't thank Leo fer nothin' it's HIS fault that whack-bitch is the way she is... and mostly I gotta thank Mike for bein' such a master of torture that anything else is easy.

Gad, it's amazing what one little story sets off in another....

BTW, excellent story. LOVE the ending.

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greenwillow27 January 12 2009, 21:26:58 UTC
LOL!
I love Raph's acceptance speech. Now I want to see where it's going to show up.
;o)

Thank you!

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wizardelfgirl January 12 2009, 22:45:11 UTC
ROTFL!!!

I can see them at the Oscars and all (definitely in normal black suits, not those horrible color-coded things from FF), and Raph kinda tongue-tied from all the attention.

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whiteadelphi January 13 2009, 00:06:57 UTC
...this is fantastic. Wow. :3

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greenwillow27 January 13 2009, 01:38:05 UTC
Oh my, thank you...
About half-way into this I realized I had set up a scene not too different from your recent Bishop/Leo fic but I really wanted to play some more with Karai's love /hate /arousal /outrage /confusion issue. I figured you *probably* wouldn't sue me for plagiarism.
;o)

Thank you!

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whiteadelphi January 13 2009, 01:49:29 UTC
Oh heavens no. I think the two are vastly different. =D I didn't even make a comparison until you mentioned it.

Poor 4Kids!Karai is a little messed up, isn't she?

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greenwillow27 January 13 2009, 02:16:39 UTC
She is. And I love messing her up even worse.
=oD

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greenwillow27 January 13 2009, 01:41:10 UTC
Raphael has plenty of moments where he may not exactly think things through, but bottom line he's *not* stupid.

Thank you!

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lady_ganesh January 13 2009, 02:52:52 UTC
FUCK YEAH RAPH.

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greenwillow27 January 14 2009, 04:25:44 UTC
Dassa our boy, yah!

;O)

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engelina_c January 13 2009, 08:08:58 UTC
nice ficlet, and loved reading it. karai's reactions seem to really fit her, imo.

in the end, thoug, raph does beat her. and that, while being tied to a table. so yes, go raph!

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greenwillow27 January 14 2009, 04:28:56 UTC
Once in a while I think it's important to allow Raph some brains along with all that magnificent brawn.
;o)

Thank you!

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