Fic: Perchance to Dream [Part 3]

[greenpixidust]

So here is part three. There will be smut next chapter, promise. Hopefully I am achieving the tension and slow build here without drawing it out too much. So, enjoy!

[Part the First] [Part the Second]

Title: Perchance to Dream: Part 3
Author: Mira (greenpixidustRating: NC-17 (eventually

Comments

[angleico3156789]

Lovely chapter hon! Keep up the good work. I love your descriptions!

[greenpixidust]

Thank you so much! My descriptions are something that I've been specifically working on, so I'm really happy that I seem to be doing well with them.

[n_e_star]

What a cool idea for a dream world!

[greenpixidust]

Thank you! One of the things I set out to do with this fic is play with the physics of it all, because that is obviously one of the things Ariadne is interested in. It may not serve a purpose for a job, but if you can mess around in the dream space, who wouldn't do something cool with it?

[sandie_eggo]

Interesting. Very different dream world from most fics. Also, well written descriptions.

The scene kind of reminded me of Disney's 'Little Mermaid' with Ariadne as Ariel and Arthur as Prince Eric. I think that makes Mal Ursula :)

[greenpixidust]

It was a kinda meant to give that impression. After all, dreams are often influenced by things that you saw a long time ago. Although I could see Ariadne curling up with some popcorn and watching the movie again.

And thank you again for the compliment on the descriptions. I've been working on that and my beta has been very good with telling me when I need to put more in, making sure I have enough description.