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greenmunkii87

Birthday party, part 4

Aug 22, 2009 13:24

Ok ok, sorry it took forever for me to post. Just been having a very very busy life at the moment.
Man I hat this chapter, feels so forced. Hope you guys like it though. It'll get better and I'll make sure to add some jed and octy lovings.
But anyway here it is, enjoy and don't kill me >.Octavius groaned softly as he felt himself come to, his eyes ( Read more... )

jedediah, fanfiction, octavius, alexia

Comments 6

kuriamelia August 22 2009, 20:46:36 UTC

Awwww, how cute. Larry/Alexia is adorable. But I think Larry/Anyone is adorable lolz.

I don't think this chapter is as bad as you think it is Sis. T'is good.

greenmunkii87 August 22 2009, 20:51:12 UTC

Yay thank you, next chapter will be for you cause it shall have sexings :)

starshinedc August 29 2009, 20:35:34 UTC

oooooh
Somebody likes Alex
:D

*now has the urge to write and Alex/Larry*
XD

alexia_g_smith August 29 2009, 21:01:16 UTC

Omg I would love to see that!

I give you permission to use Alexia :)
I love your writing!

starshinedc August 29 2009, 21:12:55 UTC

:D
Then perhaps I shall

phantomroses180 September 30 2009, 03:45:14 UTC

Hmmm interesting, I was wondering what you would do with the whole thing with her getting outside. I like the idea of having Alex and Larry get together, very cute. I can honestly say I didn't see it coming :) I loved this chapter, lots of cute awkward Larry moments hahahaha. Can't wait to see what Octy and Jed think of all this! Should be interesting :)

<3 Phantom