Zomg hardcore... Yeah, this defs needs a sappy ended. Lotsa guilt on Jed's part, and then forgiveness on Octy's, finished up with a happy, lovey ending.
Oh my gosh... You know, all the other stories that people write with this pairing are lovey-dovey and don't have hardly any hardcore things going on like this. Not only is this one of the first of its kind, but it's very well thought out.
I still can't believe Jed would rape Octy, though. I mean, if it came down to it, I think (given the circumstances) it would be Jed that rapes Octy, definitely not the other way around. But I can't get it through my mind that either of them would actually rape the other one.
Still, this was beautiful (in its own way). The passion with which Jed does his thing is just overwhelming and Octavius' pleas for his life basically are just amazing.
It was a little strange for me to enter into this kind of territory. But I think it came out well. Now I just gotta wrap it up hehe
Yeah I wondered if Octavius could do something like this, but I couldn't picture it, but if Jed was totally shitfaced off moonshine with a roman all tied up, I mean I bet it's a nice view of his butt lol
Hopefully you guys will enjoy the ending I have in store :)
Also, homosexuality wouldn't have been widely accepted in Jed's society so if he was having feelings for Octavius the confusion over his desires could have manifested as violence. Because he's feeling strong emotions that he doesn't understand properly, to cope he would try to change them into something he could understand (rage and horniness, as opposed to love).
That is a good comment starshinedc. I didn't notice the significance of that till you pointed it out, its simple but:
Octavius is being raped by someone he loves.
The feelings that Octavius is going to have to deal about this are going to be really complex. I wonder if that is what our author is going to delve into in the next segment.
Its one thing having a abusive significant other but how would you feel if that significant other sexually assaulted you on top of everything...would that feel worse? or is being assaulted physically...less worse? cause the sexual assault is degrading and really objectifies the person to a thing...it is arguably more feelingless at least abuse is driven by passion that is something altogether. What would hurt more from a emotional standpoint?
Well the thing is they aren't a couple yet. Octavius has yet to tell Jedediah how he feels and Jedediah feels mostly likely deep down inside some sort of attraction.
It came out with the drinking and in a totally wrong way. Guess you'll have to wait and see what happens :)
I love that movie.... they are so in love. Its cannon!! The writers actually took out some of the dialogue because in the original script they were calling eachother darling and sweetheart. They were SUPPOSED to be gay!!! Watch the movie you'll see why.... and you'll see why most fans of Tulio and Miguel dont really like the character, Chel.
Oh good I cant wait to read it!!!! So good..... I cried when Jeddy raepd him!! DX
that was a very interesting chapter. I really don't see how octavius can ever forgive jed for this. You did a amazing job of making the scene real. For me making a scene with these two characters is the biggest challenge I think its cool that you can put them in even a scenario like this...I hope there is more to this bit because it doesn't seem like it ends like this. Jed has to realize what he has done and I'm looking forward to experience the roller coaster of feelings you put the reader through.... keep it up don't hold back even if you do think its bizarre or weird explore it through the characters
It's a challenge but if you think hard enough you can put them into any situation you want. I mean there is a special tablet in the museum that could make it possible for a male pregnancy.
I'll try not to hold back. I know how I want it to end but there's so many paths that will lead to it, I just need to find the right one :)
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I still can't believe Jed would rape Octy, though. I mean, if it came down to it, I think (given the circumstances) it would be Jed that rapes Octy, definitely not the other way around. But I can't get it through my mind that either of them would actually rape the other one.
Still, this was beautiful (in its own way). The passion with which Jed does his thing is just overwhelming and Octavius' pleas for his life basically are just amazing.
Great job. I'm looking forward to more soon!
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Now I just gotta wrap it up hehe
Yeah I wondered if Octavius could do something like this, but I couldn't picture it, but if Jed was totally shitfaced off moonshine with a roman all tied up, I mean I bet it's a nice view of his butt lol
Hopefully you guys will enjoy the ending I have in store :)
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Maybe =P
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Raped by the man he loves
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Leave it to Jed to overreact like that, but alcohol does make you do wild things...
I can't wait for the ending
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Octavius is being raped by someone he loves.
The feelings that Octavius is going to have to deal about this are going to be really complex. I wonder if that is what our author is going to delve into in the next segment.
Its one thing having a abusive significant other but how would you feel if that significant other sexually assaulted you on top of everything...would that feel worse? or is being assaulted physically...less worse? cause the sexual assault is degrading and really objectifies the person to a thing...it is arguably more feelingless at least abuse is driven by passion that is something altogether. What would hurt more from a emotional standpoint?
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Octavius has yet to tell Jedediah how he feels and Jedediah feels mostly likely deep down inside some sort of attraction.
It came out with the drinking and in a totally wrong way.
Guess you'll have to wait and see what happens :)
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Waiting is so troublesome
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Now I have to read the rest of the story!!! Pleez post soon. *starts jumping up and down*
great story!!! you are a wonderful writer!!
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I've never seen that movie before, I've always wanted to though.
Don't worry I will try to finish the rest tonight before I go to bed
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Oh good I cant wait to read it!!!! So good..... I cried when Jeddy raepd him!! DX
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What's the movie called so I can rent it.
I wanna read this original script lol.
They look cute.
Have you done fanfic for them?
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I mean there is a special tablet in the museum that could make it possible for a male pregnancy.
I'll try not to hold back.
I know how I want it to end but there's so many paths that will lead to it, I just need to find the right one :)
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