Birthday party, part 1

Jul 11, 2009 13:27

Alright I finally got my writing back on track, think I just needed a little rest, so here you guys go, hope you enjoy ( Read more... )

jedediah, fanfiction, octavius, alexia

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blitzbebe July 11 2009, 23:16:54 UTC
Jedediah acts a lot like Alexia's brother....

Also, OOO. Plot point! Scary plot point! Every parent's worst nightmare. lol

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greenmunkii87 July 11 2009, 23:21:12 UTC
I didn't mean it to come that way, he's childish an all in his own kinda way I guess. I dunno guess I should worn on it >.

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greenmunkii87 July 12 2009, 00:20:39 UTC
Also think the reason I do Jed in that way sort of is cause I'm like best buds with my dad, its weird I dunno. Not sure how else I could maybe act him out >.> Hmm
Which part was he brotherly like?

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bittykitty20 July 12 2009, 00:13:17 UTC
great job!! looking forward to reading more ^ ^

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cholomunkers July 12 2009, 03:33:32 UTC
Aww adorable! Ooh I hope Ahkmenrah can help clear up what's going on, poor little father's having to worry about it! How hot that they woke up to play together, really enjoying that. I can't wait to see what happens next!

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greenmunkii87 July 12 2009, 03:39:44 UTC
Yeah I threw in that morning part for you cause I remember you asking about it.
Don't worry there'll be some more yummyness coming up :)

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cholomunkers July 12 2009, 06:36:49 UTC
I'm honored! They are so so sweet together, I think you captured how they'd bot act as dad's wonderfully.

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phantomroses180 July 12 2009, 04:58:50 UTC
Geez I didn't really think about her aging like that. Hm this presents an interesting problem. I'm sure Akmenrah can do something about it though or the tablet can. Anyway, this was really cute! They make such an awesome family :) Can't wait for more!

<3Phantom

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greenmunkii87 July 12 2009, 05:12:37 UTC
Glad you like it, working on the second chapter, currently battling writers block

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phantomroses180 July 12 2009, 06:42:40 UTC
Uhg I hate that... It's so annoying. I hope it clears up :)

<3 Phantom

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hiking up his lovers skirt quickly going for the prize. eskyraven July 12 2009, 10:45:11 UTC
Eww I just had a cup of noodles. I'm getting tired of having those as late night snacks. I posted a few poems I found on my livejournal for you I haven't forgotten, I have another one but I'm trying to find the original work, alot of them get fragmented and I don't remember where I saved the originals.

Anyway, GREAT STORY! Its got me really interested whats happening with Alexia growing older and Jed and Oct being stuck at a certain age. I was wondering if you got that from the movie or you sort of were being creative. I really need to watch those movies!

I think its hella funny that Octavius is getting called MAMA!!

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Re: hiking up his lovers skirt quickly going for the prize. greenmunkii87 July 12 2009, 15:41:58 UTC
Well in the movie it doesn't talk about their age or if they grow up but considering the fact that they've been there with the tablet for quite some time I'd have to say they're stuck as they're are, but with Alexia being you know slightly human its different for her.

I shall go read them now and leave comments

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