Beauty must be broken - Part 1: Snow White Queen

[greenmoon666]

Title: Beauty must be broken
Authour: Dana
Pairing: ReitaxMiyavi
Rating: NC-17, smut, rape
Warnings: Yaoi, rape, non beta
Genre: Angst, smut, yaoi, rape
Disclaimer: I own nothing and make no profit with this.

Comments

[improbabilityx]

[greenmoon666]

heheehehe~ I get it. XD Thank you!

[improbabilityx]

[vmnoneko]

Oh god, I'm terrible but I so enjoyed this rape sceneXD! I like how you wrote in first person's POV and used present tense; it makes it feel very real and as if the reader is in reita's mind!
Will Miyavi hate or forgive Reita?
Please post the next part soon!

[greenmoon666]

This fic was for my enjoyment so it will have the next part soon. No worries! X3 Thank you!!!

[realm_of_ravenx]

Another masterpiece.
Loved it.
You made me hate one of my fave bass players for a few moments but in the end it was worth it. I still love my little noseless man. ^_^
Keep up the great work!

[greenmoon666]

ow~ *melts* Thank you so much!! *happy tears* T_T
*snort* noseless man~! <3 Kyah~ so cute~

[jamie_kay180]

wow, that was brilliant, so harsh, but i loved it. i like the way Miyavi's recoiling back to reita even after what he's done.

<3

[greenmoon666]

I think that will make more sence with the next part. ;)
Thank you!!! <3

[jamie_kay180]

thats good =)

<3 cant wait for the next part!

[sike_o_path]

Rest is good for you! But aside from that, surprise for me! You have found one of my favorite pairings. *tackles and hugs* Yay Dana! *gives you some juice randomly*

[greenmoon666]

Really? *hugs back* They are such a cute pairing! Kyah~ Only is Miyavi is uke~ ;)