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greenleofiend

My Brother's Keeper (Don & Charlie): K+

Mar 15, 2009 15:01

Title: My Brother’s Keeper
Challenge: 8-Memory ( brothers100 )
Genre: Angst
Rating: K+
Characters/Fandom: Numb3rs: Don, Charlie, mention of others
Spoilers/Warnings: Season 3: Episode 23: Money for Nothing
Word Count: 400

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numb3rs, charlie eppes, alan eppes, brothers100, don eppes

Comments 9

eightiswild March 16 2009, 03:45:33 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww -hugs Charlie...then hugs Don- What a sweet sweet little drabble my friend! It was beautiful!

greenleofiend March 16 2009, 03:48:45 UTC

The drabble that didn't want to quick! I debated going off course and just making it a regular sized fic. But I got to your maximum. I am glad you enjoyed it. I had fun.

eightiswild March 16 2009, 03:58:26 UTC

It was soo cute. I LOVED that episode like mad

klutzy_girl March 16 2009, 14:54:52 UTC

I loved this. Poor boys.I love that scene. You should make this a regular sized fic.

greenleofiend March 16 2009, 18:36:52 UTC

It almost was! I am glad you enjoyed it. Maybe I will continue it before I cross post it. Thanks! :-)

devon99 March 16 2009, 19:42:01 UTC

This was great.

You should defintely try and expand this into a fuller piece.

greenleofiend March 16 2009, 20:15:31 UTC

Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed it. More on the flashbacks on both sides? A fuller one piece or a chapter piece?

devon99 March 16 2009, 20:23:37 UTC

A fuller Don POV but also a Charlie POV and then maybe a little more at the end to give the story a little closure as they look back on it with adult eyes and the realisation that they aren't those boys anymore and that things have changed between them.

Maybe?

Thanks for the feedback greenleofiend March 17 2009, 05:14:32 UTC

Great ideas! I will see what I can do. Thanks.