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Bait and Switch by nice_girls_play, M11U, Britt/Kato, PG-13

Mar 03, 2011 15:50

Title: Bait and Switch
Author: nice_girls_playWord Count: 3629 ( Read more... )

character: mike axford, character: kato, character: britt reid, pairing: britt/kato, rating: t/pg-13, verse: 2011 movie, word count: 1k+, type: slash, author: nice_girls_play, genre: pre-slash, character: lenore case

Comments 18

ruggerdavey March 3 2011, 22:40:14 UTC

Loved it! Totally plausible and left me wanting more.

nice_girls_play March 4 2011, 22:33:57 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) Not sure if they'll be more but I never say never.

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nice_girls_play March 5 2011, 02:19:41 UTC

Thank you very much! :D I'm glad you liked so many of the details. Some came easier than others. (And I love that Kato beating someone up for their flowers made you laugh at work!)

starshinedc March 3 2011, 23:49:20 UTC

Yaaaaaaaay XD
Way to go, Kato, lmao.

Pretend boyfriend my ass~

katoisawesome March 4 2011, 10:04:21 UTC

IKR! :D
Pretend boyfriend. AS IF!
That being said, I said all I can say for this fic (in the previous chapters) except that I WANT MOREEE. Still.

nice_girls_play March 4 2011, 22:45:15 UTC

Thank you so much for all your wonderful encouragement. I'm really glad you stuck with it and I appreciated all of your feedback :)

I'm not sure if there's going to be more of this story, but I'm not ruling it out.

nice_girls_play March 4 2011, 22:42:50 UTC

That boy really is a wonder, isn't he? I think it's more than just pretend for both of them (Kato will figure it out first, of course, if he hasn't already). Thanks for the feedback! :D

grinchgurl March 4 2011, 02:59:58 UTC

i loved it. so cute and deffinanyly left me wanting more of it

nice_girls_play March 4 2011, 22:48:17 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

squarededdie March 4 2011, 03:41:26 UTC

Really loved how you portrayed Lenore and Mike's current stance, and how she'd figured that he may as well be some kind of a father figure to Britt. That idea never came to me watching the film, which was all about Britt's father/son relationship, so this is an intriguing angle to further explore. Thank you for an entertaining read. Looking forward to more.

nice_girls_play March 5 2011, 03:16:03 UTC

You're very welcome, I'm glad you liked the story and thank you so much for the great feedback. I'm fascinated by what little we saw of Axford in the movie and I got the feeling he wanted to be a guide for Britt. And I *loved* the idea of him talking with Lenore about the paper and Britt/Kato.