Comments | greenhoodloxley: no idea...

greenhoodloxley

no idea...

Mar 16, 2011 08:47

I want to be a robot ( Read more... )

awake against my will, random, writing, what

Comments 7

flynn_boyant March 16 2011, 14:04:21 UTC

I love it!
I honestly do!
Especially the last two stanzas, they just broke me somewhere deep inside. You know, in the good way. Raw and emotional.

DAMN.
I can't help it.
I keep reading it over and over. I find something in this very compelling but I can't quite place what that is just yet.

Man, I miss writing poetry. I haven't in ages --maybe I'll take a crack at it again soon.

greenhoodloxley March 16 2011, 15:58:37 UTC

I am so glad you like it. :)

I know. I won't write any for ages, and then it just smacks you in the face. You should have a go! Maybe it's going around. Like the flu, only better.

flynn_boyant March 16 2011, 16:01:01 UTC

Ha!
You're contagious!
I caught a case of Poetry! ;)

greenhoodloxley March 16 2011, 16:02:12 UTC

Spread the words! Spread the words #muchbetterthangerms

cinebo March 16 2011, 15:11:23 UTC

Good stuff.

greenhoodloxley March 16 2011, 15:58:48 UTC

Thanks.

karen9 March 17 2011, 09:31:16 UTC

Good! I like the way the tone changes through the verses.