Fic: When Jimmy Met Martha ch. 2

[greeneyedgirl42]

Title: When Jimmy Met Martha
Disclaimer: They ain’t mine. Don’t sue.
Rating: PG-13 to R for language and innuendo and violence.
Genre: Drama, Humor, and other such things.
Characters: Ten/Rose, Jack, Martha, Torchwood, Mickey, Jake, Jimmy, and others.
Beta: Thanks, dettiotA/N: This serves as the direct sequel to Rainy Day Woman

Comments

[svanderslice]

Another great chapter. Your characterizations are just amazing, and I really like this Jimmy you've created. Total love for Rose hitting him like that when he messed with the Doctor. :)

[leighleighla]

Thanks!

Yeah...Rose is kind of a bad-ass now that she's had 4 years on her own. ;)

[leighleighla]

Jimmy did deserve that punch.

Thanks!

[shinyopals]

I'm sorry, no matter how much you warn me off: I still really like your Jimmy!

I don't think I've ever seen another fic quite like this (in a good way!), and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

[leighleighla]

Dude, you DON'T want Jimmy! I'm telling you!

Hee. Thanks!

[kb91]

Damn, are you on a roll. Seriously, you're really firing on all cylinders with this chapter. Blew me away. (No pun intended. ;))

Your Jimmy absolutely fascinates me. I can't say I love him, because he is seriously fucked-up, but man, does he fascinate me. You've really put a lot of work into developing his character in this story compared to RDW and it shows.

I think I had the same reaction as Rose did when Jimmy killed ... well, Jimmy. My jaw fell open and I reread the paragraphs a few times, just to make sure I read what I thought I'd read. Never saw that coming. But it was definitely a powerful moment.

My favorite lines of the chapter came right after that, though ...

"Does this count as a murder or a suicide?"

Oh, Owen, Owen, Owen ... how I despise you yet love your snarkiness, all at the same time.

I'm just worried about the fact that you have no qualms about shooting yourself in the head."

Just awesome dialogue. I need an "I'm not worthy" icon. :)

Can't wait for Chapter 3!

[leighleighla]

Damn, are you on a roll. Seriously, you're really firing on all cylinders with this chapter.

Yay!! Thanks!!! I was so worried that it wouldn't work.

You've really put a lot of work into developing his character in this story compared to RDW and it shows.

Jimmy's always had depth. But RDW wasn't about him. He's definitely got a bigger part to play here.

Oh, Owen, Owen, Owen ... how I despise you yet love your snarkiness, all at the same time.

Well, if anyone was gonna ask, it would be Owen. *nods*

Can't wait for Chapter 3!

Should be up tomorrow.

Thanks!

[kb91]

Oh, and I forgot to ask ... do you have casting in mind for Jimmy? I now have David Anders stuck in my head, and he's probably going to stay there until you tell me who else I should be picturing. *g*

[leighleighla]

do you have casting in mind for Jimmy?

*Clears throat and looks embarrassed*

Y'know Mark Paul Gauselaar? Think of a hipper-looking version of the way he looked in NYPD Blue.

*sigh* I'm so nerdy.