TITLE: Worn Thin, Part 1

[greenegret]

Cool water pounding her arm. Fine, slick mud, under her cheek. Dark, heavy weight above her, smelling of oil and metal, pressing down.

A rough swallow past a lump in a dry throat, blink away dust and grit, only to see dark, shadows, darker above and strangely yellow, the sick yellow of a tornado sky. Sudden stabbing, burning pains, tingling

Comments

[greenegret]

Thank you so much - I hope that TPTB do something similar too.

I'm afraid that they're going to try to up Grissom's angst by removing Sara, one way or another.

[celievamp]

Very nicely done. Looking forward to the rest.

[greenegret]

Thank you. :) More of it should be up soon.

[greenegret]

Thank you - I tried hard to get my idea of how she'd react to that across.

[atfm]

Beautifully written, this is how it should be - Sofia saving Sara. Good job.

[greenegret]

Thank you. :)

[ariestess]

Oh wow! This is fascinating! I can't wait to read the rest!

Is there any chance I can archive a copy [or link to it, your choice] of this on the CSI page over at Frisked & Conquered?

[greenegret]

Thanks!

Yes, you can archive it there, or link to it - whichever's easier. I like that site.

The other one on my lj is the prequel to this one - you can have it too, if you like.