Comments | greenconverses: fic: Adaptation [John/Teyla, PG-13]

greenconverses

fic: Adaptation [John/Teyla, PG-13]

Oct 25, 2007 22:34

Title: Adaptation
Rating: PG-13 for language and sexuality.
Spoilers: None
Summary: John notices that Captain Emmagan isn't feeling quite like herself today. Not in the Stars universe fic, set during Season 2.
Notes: This is what popped into my head directly after finishing Not in the Stars. Because Conversion based fics are so much fun. I should be ( Read more... )

character: john sheppard, character: teyla emmagen, genre: alternate universe, - fic, ship: john/teyla

Comments 7

ticklie October 26 2007, 12:03:37 UTC

Oh, wow. You've written a sequel in this AU. Very nice; especially the choice of this particular moment in their histories.

The people of Earth were incredibly sensitive to the sight of the naked human body, so much so that both John and Ronon were no longer allowed to walk around the base shirtless.

I think there might be a more obvious reason why they weren't allowed to do that ;) It's easy to imagine John and Ronon as Pegasus natives distracting everyone on base with their half-nakedness and then bonding over the Earth people's strange reactions :D

Tiny nitpick: the word 'meditating' in the first line is missing a 't'. (A small part of me is disappointed that John wasn't actually mediating...)

greenconverses October 26 2007, 15:37:58 UTC

Thanks for the nitpick! It's fixed now.

It's easy to imagine John and Ronon as Pegasus natives distracting everyone on base with their half-nakedness and then bonding over the Earth people's strange reactions.

Oh, that's totally why they aren't allowed to do that any more. John and Ronon are just completely oblivious. :D I sense another fic coming out of this, lol.

comanche_rider October 26 2007, 18:33:52 UTC

Gah, I love this AU. It makes me happy in so many different ways. And you should totally write a fic about the shirtless thing. Instant favorite. XD

Also...

John continued to stare at her. Was this the condition Lieutenant Cadman had referred to as word vomit?

It'd be interesting to see in which conversation THAT popped up in. But that will probably just remain as a rather odd mental movie of mine. XD

starmage2 October 26 2007, 21:53:35 UTC

I would have like to seen everyone's reaction to John walking around shirtless and also how they discovered his strong gene.

starmage2 October 26 2007, 22:02:15 UTC

Both stories are in the works. I'm working on the shirtless one right now. Thanks for the comment.

greenconverses October 26 2007, 22:03:00 UTC

Sorry, the annon comment was mine. Forgot to logon in!

madjm October 27 2007, 17:23:50 UTC

I find this AU so interesting, and it's fun to see Conversion reversed, and pushed even farther. I love that you've let John keep the Ancient gene in this AU. It gives them even more of a reason to keep him at Atlantis.

I confess I did have to pause for a moment to imagine John and Ronon wandering shirtless around the city. :)