fic: Never Let Me Go [HoO, Percy/Annabeth, PG-13]

[greenconverses]

Title: Never Let Me Go
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Percy/Annabeth
Spoilers: Massive spoilers for The Mark of Athena.
Warnings: Trigger warnings for character death, PTSD, suicidal thoughts.
Summary: Annabeth’s life can be characterized in two parts: before and after the fall. This is the beginning of the second half.
Notes: This was a

Comments

[oneoffour111]

angstsplosion.

Honestly. There are so many great lines in this, and your work/agonizing over every word is obvious. Every revelation was like a punch in the stomach, and by the end I would've been crying if I wasn't in the middle of a library; the imagery and turns of phrase you created (heart skin) were gorgeous.

It's shippy and character study-ish at the same time, which is lovely, and seeing both of my bbs so wounded scarred me a little too. I loved this so much. It's so powerful ;_____________;

[greenconverses]

the imagery and turns of phrase you created (heart skin) were gorgeous

Thaaaat one was actually a typo I didn't notice until you pointed out, but I shall just pretend from now on it was my own unfiltered genius rather than lass than careful editing, haha. ;)

Thank you for commenting dear!

[lucyspevensie]

So I just posted a review on your FF.net account, but I'll do it on here as well because I LOVED THIS SO MUCH. Angsty with a little bit of cute moments in between? Perfect birthday present.

I think what I love about your fics is that you manage to really capture them as characters and get inside their heads. Their reactions and conversations are believable, and I could never imagine there not being a little part of Annabeth that felt extremely guilty for not stopping Percy from falling along with her, so bravo. Of course, there was also a bit of anger inside of Percy that revealed itself when he found out she lied about him dying, which was also believable.

(I feel like Percy knew what he was about to put himself through when he refused to let go of Annabeth in the books, but really didn't. Does that make sense? Nico was pretty shaken up from his time, so I can't imagine the torture Percabeth will have to face)I'm sort of a sucker for those scenes where a character has a nightmare and it shows that their boyfriend/girlfriend is

[wish_i_c0uld]

jfc Jess, It's like you're actively trying to kill my heart. I loved it but FIC IS SUPPOSED TO HELP YOU COPE NOT TURN YOU INTO A BALL OF TEARS AND FEELS.

[greenconverses]

I promise I will write some fluff to actually help people cope better at some point! Thank you for reading.

[ontothereverie]

It's strange that I'm currently sitting in a lecture theatre and my lecturer is speaking about indigenous/non-indigenous labour force participation in Australia like I haven't just experienced severe emotional trauma at your hands. There's too many things I could say, so I'll leave it at this: this is excellent, and I'll be rec'ing the hell out of it.

[swabluu]

I used to read so many of your fics back when I was in the Percy Jackson and the Olympians fandom on fanfiction.net a looooooong time ago. I love your writing. I will love it forever \o/ And this is absolutely gorgeous and I just got reminded that I really need to read the Mark of Athena omfg ;A;

Thank you for reminding of percabeth and how much I used to ship them sobs ;;