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[greenapricot]

Many many smooches to blurredbeauty for asking Sirius the question that spawned this.

Written in about a half hour, which is OMG fast for me. Hooray I wrote something! I'm so proud of myself.

Comments

[frolics]

I think you've captured Remus, and the dynamic between him & Sirius, perfectly. ♥

[greenapricot]

Ya know, I wasn't sure if I really had captured them, once I started writing Sirius he kind of took over, changed it a bit from what I'd originally intended, so I'm very pleased it works. Thanks! :D

[prurient_badger]

That was lovely, gorgeous insight into both of them. <3

[greenapricot]

gorgeous insight wow. Thanks! *is terribly pleased* :D

[gaski]

That was unexpectedly pretty. It didn't go where I thought it would (I think first person Sirius isn't something I've seen a lot of), but I liked where it ended up. And it helps that I have this thing about how people smell. (and I'm vaguely convinced that I don't smell of anything, but I guess I do) And it's so nice and quiet-like, and then with the Especially if you pounce. and that's just precious:>

[greenapricot]

It didn't go where I thought it would either and I blame the first person Sirius for that. He's difficult, but in a different way than I'm used to (Blaise for example). This is the way he wanted it to be I guess, and I like it here too. The pounce bit made me grin as I was typing it. It's so very Sirius to me in that he can be quiet if he wants, but not for long. Thank you, my dear. :)

[iulia_linnea]

I love your first line; it's sort of the way I've always thought about Remus without really being able to state it as succinctly. And the drabble is lovely.

[greenapricot]

Thanks so much! :D

[agentpi]

oh wow, that was gorgeous.
it's the Remus and Sirius I like to think of.

[greenapricot]

Thank you!