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[greenapricot]

Challenge from phoenixdru. Words: language, bait, chance. And Sirius Black. Wordcount: 201 (but I fudged the word count so it’s actually 210, same numbers though, see).

Be warned, this it complete angsty sap.

Comments

[ccharlotte]

Awww, I love Sirius. And the swearing thing makes perfect sense, though that's probably because I have a dirty mouth. :)

[greenapricot]

Heh, I have a dirty mouth too, I think that's where it came from in the first place. :)

[olukemi]

This made me sigh. Like remembering a friend that's moved impossibly far away but you'll always love and cling to the hope of seeing again.

It was sad but not depressing which is ridiculously hard to pull off. Kudos to you and thank you for this.

[greenapricot]

That's it, that's exactly the feeling. It's like the sort of sadness that's ok because you've still got the memories attached to that person.

Thanksomuch <3

[iulia_linnea]

Sirius Black swore fluently in five languages, creating entire worlds in the words.

I love the idea of this, and I think you captured Sirius perfectly.